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post Feb 1 08, 19:59
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VIXEN

With a come-hither, sexy glance
she plundered my disposition,
instantly eradicated anxious despair
while igniting my virile ambition.

Her audacious, enticing presence
aroused a roguish smile
from my mirthful, ruddy face,
forcing a feigned guile.

Dressed in skintight, silky leather
and see-through lace,
her salacious silhouette dominated
my prurient, solitary space.

With her consuming, sensual hugs,
and hypnotic, emerald eyes,
this coquette heightened my desire
for a delectable surprise.

But a rising, vacillating demeanor
delivered a cautionary sign;
her evasive persona surreptitiously
tread a stark, cagy line.

This transient, lustful encounter
was a bewitching charade;
I’m overcome with a vacuous feeling,
and a sense of being betrayed.

My spirit now broken and disheartened
by a consuming lament;
my deflated ego triggered an empty,
perilous, dejected descent.

Beware of fleeting, alluring hot chicks
with saccharine smiles;
they’ll lead you down a potholed path,
hazardous for endless miles.


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Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition! troy.gif

Perhaps you'll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the 'bringer of victory'? cali.gif

Best of luck in the battle! vic.gif

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