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MM's IBPC Nomination Poll for Jun (Jul comp)
Which poems do you choose, No. 1?
Hollowed Ground [ 4 ] ** [23.53%]
Finding My Way [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Faded Layers [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Water Wise [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Jeoffry [ 6 ] ** [35.29%]
The Flag [ 2 ] ** [11.76%]
Yet Unwritten [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
A Beckoning at Crater Lake [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Which poems do you choose, No. 2?
Hollowed Ground [ 5 ] ** [29.41%]
Finding My Way [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Faded Layers [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Water Wise [ 0 ] ** [0.00%]
Jeoffry [ 2 ] ** [11.76%]
The Flag [ 3 ] ** [17.65%]
Yet Unwritten [ 4 ] ** [23.53%]
A Beckoning at Crater Lake [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Which poems do you choose, No. 3?
Hollowed Ground [ 2 ] ** [11.76%]
Finding My Way [ 2 ] ** [11.76%]
Faded Layers [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
Water Wise [ 2 ] ** [11.76%]
Jeoffry [ 0 ] ** [0.00%]
The Flag [ 4 ] ** [23.53%]
Yet Unwritten [ 1 ] ** [5.88%]
A Beckoning at Crater Lake [ 5 ] ** [29.41%]
Total Votes: 17
  
AMETHYST
post Jun 7 07, 20:53
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Hollowed Ground by Nada Lott

Along an eon-charted course
the river flows relentlessly
to carve a way through massive rock.
Its steady passage humbles me.

From rim to rim, these depths are but
a speck beneath the firmament
and I, beside them, apperceive
my smallness to its full extent.

For no appraiser stands prepared
to grasp the fathomless. Time wrought
a canyon; its Creator's mind
encompasses perfected thought.

I search my vocal repertoire,
superlatives exhausted. Now,
from parted lips that drip with awe
escapes a feeble, whispered, "Wow."


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AMETHYST
post Jun 7 07, 21:07
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The Flag ... by Judi

The air is still, as though the earth has held its breath;
the tears that flow are triggered by the sound of guns.
Two soldiers fold a flag, for war has claimed a life,
which like a budding tree had barely just begun.

As parents hear the bugler play his final note,
the mother sighs, a grieving father holds her hand.
Nothing soothes the pain his loved ones still must reap,
a shiny medal in a box, his last command.

Friends shake their hands, not knowing what do or say,
The parents nod their heads and shake each hand in turn,
So difficult to leave him there, an only son,
who chose this life, and knew that he might not return.

Tomorrow, they will fold another flag up tight;
salute with guns that echo with staccato sound.
The Taps will play for one who'll walk the earth no more.
When will they see no victories are found in war?


Judith Labriola

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Thanks so much for selecting my poem to be considered...it means a lot to me. I pull this one out every June, since I was born on "Flag Day" That flag stands for so much! Judi

This post has been edited by Cleo_Serapis: Jul 29 07, 08:06
Reason for edit: Revision posted


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- AMETHYST   MM's IBPC Nomination Poll for Jun (Jul comp)   Jun 7 07, 20:53
- - AMETHYST   Stimulus: A fragment from Kit Smart's Jubilate...   Jun 7 07, 21:04
- - Nada Lott   Permission granted. Thanks for the heads-up in He...   Jun 16 07, 09:44
|- - Rosemerta   Greetings, Mary, Between here and New Mexico t...   Jun 26 07, 12:53
- - Cleo_Serapis   The time has arrived to choose the three poems tha...   Jun 20 07, 18:34
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hmmm - the last voter voted for the same poem all ...   Jun 27 07, 18:47
- - Cleo_Serapis   This Poll is now closed. With the votes from the 1...   Jun 29 07, 05:00
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Mary and good luck in the IBPC comp! ...   Jun 29 07, 05:03
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Judi and best of luck in the IBPC comp...   Jun 29 07, 05:04
|- - Judi   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jun 29 07, 06:04 ) ...   Jun 29 07, 05:40
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks so much Jackie! I'm just thrilled...   Jun 29 07, 05:06
- - Cathy   Congratulations Judi! Good luck in the ne...   Jun 29 07, 07:54
|- - Judi   QUOTE (Cathy @ Jun 29 07, 08:54 ) Congrat...   Jul 5 07, 14:49
- - Cathy   Congratulations Lori and good luck with IBPC! ...   Jun 29 07, 07:59
- - Cathy   Congratulations Mary and good luck in the next rou...   Jun 29 07, 08:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thank you very much Cathy! This was such a fun...   Jun 29 07, 11:47
- - AMETHYST   Congratulations Lori, I have very good feelings ...   Jul 1 07, 17:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thank you very much Liz! I'm just coming ...   Jul 1 07, 18:37
- - AMETHYST   Everyone's Final revisions are in ... I am so ...   Jul 1 07, 18:49
- - Cleo_Serapis   Yes, I have been checking too - I'm curious ho...   Jul 1 07, 18:55
- - Nada Lott   Deepest thanks to those who responded to the messa...   Jul 3 07, 14:06

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