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The air is still, as though the earth has held its breath;
the tears that flow are triggered by the sound of guns.
Two soldiers fold a flag, for war has claimed a life,
which like a budding tree had barely just begun.
As parents hear the bugler play his final note,
the mother sighs, a grieving father holds her hand.
Nothing soothes the pain his loved ones still must reap,
a shiny medal in a box, his last command.
Friends shake their hands, not knowing what do or say,
The parents nod their heads and shake each hand in turn,
So difficult to leave him there, an only son,
who chose this life, and knew that he might not return.
Tomorrow, they will fold another flag up tight;
salute with guns that echo with staccato sound.
The Taps will play for one who'll walk the earth no more.
When will they see no victories are found in war?
Judith Anne Labriola
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Revision 3
The air's so still, as though the earth has held its breath,
the tears that flow are triggered by the sound of guns.
The soldiers fold a flag, for war has claimed a life,
which like a budding tree had barely just begun.
The parents hear the bugler play his final note,
the mother sighs, a grieving father holds her hand.
Nothing soothes the pain that loved ones still must reap,
a shiny medal in a box, his last command.
The parents nod their heads and shake each hand in turn,
people shake their hands, not knowing what to say,
So hard to leave him there, a cherished only son,
who chose this life, and knew that it could end this way.
Tomorrow, they will fold another flag up tight;
they'll shoot the guns which echo with staccato sound.
The Taps will play for one who'll walk the earth no more,
when will they see no victories are found in war?
Judith Labriola
Revision 2
The air's so still, as though the earth now holds its breath,
the tears that flow are triggered by the sound of guns.
The soldiers fold a flag, for war has claimed a life,
which like a budding tree had barely just begun.
His blood was shed, his cries were echoed in the wind,
a mother sighs, a grieving father holds her hand.
Nothing soothes the pain that loved ones still must reap,
a lonely medal to a jeweler's box is pinned.
People shake their hands, not knowing what to say,
the parents nod their heads and shake each hand in turn.
So hard to leave him there, a cherished only son,
who chose this life, and knew that it could end this way.
Tomorrow, they will fold another flag up tight;
They'll shoot the guns which echo with staccato sound.
The Taps will play for one who'll walk the earth no more,
when will they see no victories are found in war?
Judith Labriola
The Flag...Revision 1
So still the air, as though the earth now holds its breath,
the tears that flow, are quickened by the sound of guns.
The soldiers fold a flag for war has claimed his life,
which like a budding tree had barely just begun.
His blood was shed, his cries were echoed in the wind,
a mother sighs, a grieving father holds her hand,
nothing soothes the pain for loved ones yet to reap;
a lonely medal to a jeweler's box is pinned.
People shake their hands, not knowing what to say;
The parents nod their heads and shake each hand in turn.
So hard to leave him there, their cherished
only son;
they pray it's just a dream, a thought they'll always yearn.
Tomorrow, yet another flag they'll fold up tight;
They'll shoot the guns which echo with staccato sounds.
We'll weep again, for one who'll walk the earth no more;
when will they know no victories in war are found.
Judith Labriola
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