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Aug 3 03, 10:06
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CINQUAIN: From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."
The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.
The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.
The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests: Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines. Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.
The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.
The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:
TRIAD
These be Three silent things: The falling snow... the hour Before the dawn... the mouth of one Just dead.
Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.
Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you! :p
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Cleo_Serapis Cinquain Aug 3 03, 10:06 Alan Not to Daniel's liking.
Deleted. May 6 12, 23:58 JustDaniel get it
right, friend Alan!
don't just slic... May 7 12, 07:47 Larry you're whole
undivided
a completed person
we a... May 8 12, 13:55 JustDaniel Where did you dig up the rules for the "hybri... May 8 12, 14:19 Larry Daniel,
Ms. Crapsey's cinquains may have been... May 8 12, 15:42 JustDaniel Europe
has languages
that I don't understand
b... May 8 12, 16:14 Alan use less
water is scarce
yet are flooded, with dro... May 9 12, 08:15 JustDaniel splish, splash
I was bathing
long about Saturday
a... May 9 12, 08:25 Alan Darin
to be so bold
go naked into world
with only ... May 9 12, 10:09 JustDaniel towel
is all Alan
needs when he goes public
but th... May 9 12, 10:53 Alan of course
mighty towel
only just suffices
to hide ... May 9 12, 13:09 JustDaniel off course
flies my golf ball
so I go bounding out... May 9 12, 13:25 Larry curse plat
of the golf course
surveying the deep r... May 9 12, 15:30 Alan tiger
not burning bright
when wife caught him club... May 9 12, 16:11 Larry dough wide
but very thin
when making a pizza
the i... May 10 12, 13:31 Alan bread sticks
to top palate
when not lubricated
esc... May 10 12, 16:49 JustDaniel drum sticks
hard to swallow
if they're used on... May 10 12, 17:33 Alan post host
a thank you card
show appreciation
or an... May 11 12, 00:42 JustDaniel thin cue
makes billiards
a pleasurable game
but an... May 11 12, 07:46 Alan in fight
entertainment
so what more do they want
a... May 11 12, 08:56 JustDaniel on top
of the mountain
the police found gumdrops
e... May 11 12, 10:02 Larry shoeing
a horse's feet
is a sticky business
fo... May 11 12, 13:48 Alan a twerp
might graduate
becoming complete ass
surpa... May 11 12, 15:43 Larry good lard:
oxymoron
contradicting the fact
that it... May 12 12, 08:44 Alan humans
do not trust them
so say politicians
trust ... May 12 12, 08:59 Larry hew men
with your blunt acts
until all the semblan... May 12 12, 09:20 Alan he's gone
left me alone
for weeping and gnashi... May 13 12, 03:35 Larry whose neck
stretches the most
being the first to t... May 13 12, 08:26 Alan spineless
absent backbone
is best for slithering
o... May 13 12, 11:42 Larry cow words:
mooed utterance
which is heard by the h... May 14 12, 13:21 Alan chewing
on tobacco
and your last words
you meant t... May 14 12, 23:40 Larry it's spied
and discovered
duality's intent... May 15 12, 08:06 JustDaniel punish
hapless wordsmith --
can't make a doubl... May 15 12, 09:31 Larry at farce
convolutions
guide the bewildered mind
th... May 15 12, 13:27 JustDaniel in doubts
a confused man
goes wand'rin' th... May 15 12, 14:25 Alan his heel
flat, down and out
in city of angels
he,... May 15 12, 23:58 JustDaniel dirt's crap
that's composted
for their nat... May 16 12, 04:14 Alan to eat
or not to eat
whether it is nobler
to gobbl... May 16 12, 07:13 JustDaniel to starve
just to lose weight
will never reach you... May 16 12, 10:12 Alan to live
hedonistic
for one's pleasure is all
a... May 17 12, 03:12 JustDaniel aweigh
go the anchors
as the cruise ship sails off... May 17 12, 06:40 Larry waters
many faces
reflect on the future
erasing hi... May 17 12, 09:05 Alan in time
or before time
what is eternity
if not sev... May 17 12, 16:28 Larry tomb mud
mortars the cracks
where pharoahs are res... May 18 12, 01:11 Alan shifty
a mean-eyed look
our cat Rumplestitzkin
cam... May 18 12, 04:18 Larry off course
directionless
it's time for GPS
whi... May 18 12, 08:28 JustDaniel end look:
read last chapter?
check out the appendi... May 18 12, 13:59 Alan witch won
with those three hags
total disharmony
w... May 20 12, 02:08 JustDaniel Aldi
is usually
the cheapest place to shop
but its... May 21 12, 08:11 Larry yurt hoist:
fulcrumed lever
which also doubles as
... May 21 12, 09:19 JustDaniel 'round house
he runs naked
to see if it's ... May 21 12, 11:01 Alan this dance
or that dog-trot
coyote does soft-shoe
... May 21 12, 12:26 Larry While he
sped through the dust
chasing the roadrun... May 21 12, 23:39 Alan WILES, LACK OF
de feet
dey keep runnin'
even ... May 22 12, 00:19 JustDaniel highways
through the valley;
driveways just for pa... May 22 12, 08:51 Alan road rules
illogical
so are lan-gu-age rules
any m... May 22 12, 12:49 JustDaniel offense
is best defense
and vice versa as well;
an... May 22 12, 13:36 Alan Fatso
the constant cries
throughout all his school... May 22 12, 23:16 JustDaniel new help
cannot give change
without cash register... May 22 12, 23:55 Alan outlawed
using own brain
please just tick the boxe... May 23 12, 00:51 Larry say slaw
with your sandwich
do away with dressing
... May 23 12, 14:50 Alan over
after over
will these Americans
never get the... May 23 12, 16:35 Larry it's done
by eleven
men playing a childs game
... May 24 12, 15:11 JustDaniel patience
is requisite
for a physical therapist
to ... May 24 12, 15:45 Larry patents
are documents
given to inventors
proving t... May 24 12, 23:36 Alan pending
resolution
let us go on fighting
so much m... May 25 12, 01:40 JustDaniel no use
to keep fighting
after the truce is signed,... May 25 12, 08:05 Larry greave up
to my kneecap
bolsters my confidence
whe... May 25 12, 08:59 JustDaniel my skin's
getting darker
as summer approaches
... May 25 12, 09:09 Larry got brunt
of sun's effects
while lying on the ... May 25 12, 22:26 Alan Freud faced
innermost fears
discovered subconsciou... May 26 12, 03:53 JustDaniel which beasts
are most scary
to a normal person?
wh... May 26 12, 09:58 Alan these days
man's benighted
what we knew to be ... May 26 12, 23:00 JustDaniel in haste
a blah cinquain
is hardly worth reading,
... May 27 12, 07:42 Larry anthem
a solution
in an exotic zoo
for feeding the... May 27 12, 23:02 JustDaniel ad book
a little thin
during a recession;
no confi... May 28 12, 11:40 Larry perch has
the competence
to find the food it needs... May 29 12, 23:50 JustDaniel a touch
during sorrow
without consolation
is worth... May 30 12, 07:45 Larry spun out
with perfection
geometric patterns
adorn ... May 30 12, 14:18 JustDaniel steel knife
stainlessly cut
through every barrier
... May 30 12, 19:16 Larry tome E
is the biggest
encyclopedia
where everythin... Jun 1 12, 00:18 JustDaniel X-ist
wipes out people
when he's been contract... Jun 1 12, 10:57 Larry two live
together for
companionship and fun
to liv... Jun 1 12, 14:00 JustDaniel butter
when it's melted
tastes great on a waff... Jun 4 12, 08:45 Larry his best
was not enough
when he tried to make wine... Jun 5 12, 14:12 JustDaniel less sleeze
in your poems
increases their beauty
b... Jun 6 12, 07:56 Larry force ale
over palates
of epicureans
who may feel ... Jun 6 12, 14:32 JustDaniel on wry
a ham sandwiched
unruly dry humor
into the ... Jun 6 12, 16:07 Larry meaty
subject with corn
beefing the sand which is
... Jun 9 12, 13:42 JustDaniel to lunch
with weak humor
can be very pleasant;
you... Jun 12 12, 08:12 Larry shallow
innuendoes
more readily reveal
underlying ... Jun 12 12, 16:53 JustDaniel knee pads
on grasshoppers
are quite invisible
beca... Jun 12 12, 19:38 Larry no knead
buisquits and bread
now come in a small b... Jun 13 12, 14:55 JustDaniel forsake
leave it behind
forget what you have done
... Jun 15 12, 17:32 Larry all ways
have been opened
to the adventurous
leavi... Jun 18 12, 00:14 JustDaniel my beak
has been reddened
from a week on the beach... Jun 26 12, 07:34 Larry grins tone
the mouth's muscles
keeping wrinkle... Jun 27 12, 14:55 JustDaniel Frau Nein
keeps insisting
on Greek austerity
in ex... Jun 29 12, 13:15 Larry bail out
a sinking ship
that now rests on the bank... Jul 1 12, 13:55 JustDaniel Ann Klein
provides treatment
for mental health cli... Jul 2 12, 08:34
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