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May 17 12, 06:40
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aweigh go the anchors as the cruise ship sails off to explore the Caribbean waters
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May 17 12, 09:05
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waters many faces reflect on the future erasing history's footsteps in time
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May 17 12, 16:28
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in time or before time what is eternity if not severe levelling down to mud ?
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May 18 12, 01:11
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tomb mud mortars the cracks where pharoahs are resting in pyramids built on the sands shifting
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May 18 12, 04:18
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shifty a mean-eyed look our cat Rumplestitzkin came to be know as Crinklebaum of course
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May 18 12, 08:28
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off course directionless it's time for GPS which means it's a "Good Place to Stop" and look
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May 18 12, 13:59
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end look: read last chapter? check out the appendix? quarterback eyeing his target? which won?
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May 20 12, 02:08
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witch won with those three hags total disharmony would rule which-witch machinations all day
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May 21 12, 08:11
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Aldiis usually the cheapest place to shop but its selections might dampen your choice
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May 21 12, 09:19
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yurt hoist: fulcrumed lever which also doubles as a travois pole when moving your round house
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May 21 12, 11:01
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'round house he runs naked to see if it's raining; no one really knows why he does this dance
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May 21 12, 12:26
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this dance or that dog-trot coyote does soft-shoe while road-runners give dance the bird wile e
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May 21 12, 23:39
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While he sped through the dust chasing the roadrunner mind raced to the agony of defeat
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May 22 12, 00:19
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WILES, LACK OF
de feet dey keep runnin' even when him mind's stopped realising his huge error de ways
Alan
PS alternative reading, concatenation :
realising his huge err o' de ways
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May 22 12, 08:51
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highways through the valley; driveways just for parking; parkways where everyone's driving; make sense?
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May 22 12, 12:49
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road rules illogical so are lan-gu-age rules any more fit for the purpose of sense ?
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May 22 12, 13:36
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offense is best defense and vice versa as well; any footballer will tell you it’s so
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May 22 12, 23:16
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Fatso the constant cries throughout all his school days leading him to comfort eating no help
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May 22 12, 23:55
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new help cannot give change without cash register's telling her the exact amount out loud
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May 23 12, 00:51
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outlawed using own brain please just tick the boxes for that is now the correct form says law ....
Alan
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