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Feb 18 12, 18:05
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Former cinquain queens, red, are welcome on this thread - off with head - though many of us will duck
Alan
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Feb 19 12, 09:58
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Will Duck, Daffy's cousin, cringes at loud noises. His first and only job was a decoy.
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Feb 19 12, 10:37
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Thank you Larry -
[center]Former Cinquain queen's hive Mosaic Musings; thrives to keep amazing poetry alive -
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Feb 19 12, 15:56
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Alive but unaware there were two more new posts, Alan's and mine, after my note to you.
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Feb 20 12, 21:13
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Sorry Alan and Larry, I didn't see the two posts after your original post --
Let me start again ...
Alan, your Cinquain is wonderful, no need to duck ... your Cinquains are like gold.
Blessings Liz
Hi Larry,
So sorry about that - I will start with your latest ...
To you: A smiling heart ensures such gratitude- new threads inspire new poetry... with in
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Feb 20 12, 23:40
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With thin participants and collaborators, inspiration is hard to find these days.
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Feb 21 12, 01:59
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These days are come, and gone in an instant, a flash. Poof, my batteries have gone flat, bye bye ....
Alan
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Feb 21 12, 08:07
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[ THIS ONE IS AN OOPS]
form 'er up how your like so long as the first line approximates the one that goes before
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Feb 21 12, 08:10
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buy, buy indulgences for having missed a page... he didn't warn me that I'd missed the page
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Feb 21 12, 15:18
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The page, one of nineteen and soon to be twenty, finally got us all on the same one.
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Feb 21 12, 16:47
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Sam won the cleanup job; he just did my office and will be back to vacuum later.
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Feb 21 12, 17:02
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Vacu- um later, get correct syllable count with your tongue-twisting correctness in space
Alan
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Feb 21 12, 20:03
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Inn's pace slowed to a crawl when two o'clock arrived. Those who had walked in earlier crawled out.
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Feb 21 12, 20:29
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Crawled out, or plain tuckered on the calling of "Time" a ceremony now cancelled - zonked out ....
Alan
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Feb 22 12, 00:03
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song taut no wasted words with catchy melody won't likely be forgettable for years
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Feb 22 12, 03:01
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Four years; some gestation ! Labour intensively, bureaucrats of the world, produce a mouse ....
Alan
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Feb 22 12, 07:09
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Amos Quito bit me. knock knock Who's there? Andy. Andy Who? Andy bit me yet again.
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Feb 22 12, 15:22
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A gain in comedy was lost in racism. Vaudeville's death was not from Ziegfeld's follies.
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Feb 22 12, 20:51
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foil leaks juicy substance from your deli sandwich assuring that the whole mess is still hot
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Feb 23 12, 00:55
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Still... hot from the wood fire used to boil the corn mash but the copper coils will cool the moonshine.
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