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Aug 7 17, 18:14
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eye woke to find its lids had been written upon then I saw it was a dream when I woke
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Aug 9 17, 09:14
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I woke from an odd dream where I reenacted a Marine Corps battle scene from Iwo
This is my 1,000th Cinquain and it really wasn’t a dream. I was honored on one Mardi Gras parade float to participate, as a Marine veteran, in the flag raising on Iwo Jima; something I’ll always remember and it still brings tears to my eyes thinking of it.
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Aug 9 17, 10:14
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no woe to feeling tears on an old Marine's face celebrating his heritage Oorah!
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Aug 10 17, 14:21
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Oohra has now replaced Semper Fi – Do or Die; guess old Devil Dogs were taught some new tricks
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Aug 10 17, 18:10
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new Trix are less likely to be soggy as snacks but you'd better remember they're for kids
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Aug 11 17, 16:11
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finer start
for kids it’s breakfast notwithstanding the plea; every child would always prefer real sweet
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Aug 12 17, 02:59
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RIVAL SONGS
real sweats involving too vicious, heavy passion at the end may be found singing legends
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Aug 14 17, 14:32
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law is set by
legends are made by those who try to be the best in everything and those superb sure try
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Aug 15 17, 06:58
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SALAD YUMMY
sure, try almonds 'til you like discovering them among your lettuce while you glom dairy
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Aug 16 17, 13:53
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daily yawns
dairy adds a white sea in meals from a milk cow lactating with A-vitamin yields
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Aug 17 17, 13:09
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yield to temptation to write an acrostic and Larry will force you to pay daily
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Aug 18 17, 07:59
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daily apple intake won’t keep away doctors because fiber always comes out nightly
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Aug 18 17, 09:10
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nightly wild extrusions can be quite a peeling from all of yesterday's apple dumplings
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Aug 19 17, 18:42
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dump lings after cleaning into the big stew pot and when they’re done you can have a cod piece
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Aug 19 17, 22:09
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cod piece in egg batter and rolled in sifted flour then deep fried to a golden brown... top that!
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Aug 20 17, 22:20
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top that with strawberries and some nice fresh whipped cream so you can no longer see the short cake
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Aug 21 17, 10:13
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short cake and tall candle make a nice first birthday for your blessed first granddaughter's party
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Aug 22 17, 09:40
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prior youth
party really won’t do if old like me and you, or it’s you and I if I must refresh
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Aug 22 17, 14:28
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This makes no sense, but it is still an acrostic!
ROYAL HOTTY
refresh our large ego yammering loudly at a regal hotty who is not lady
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Aug 23 17, 11:43
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liked yours
lady isn’t one who kings would rent for a sou except she charges much more for day rates
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