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Jul 16 17, 23:07
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good gnus share the bad news when the leopard's charging or the hyena's laughing gets too close
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Jul 17 17, 21:47
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too close for comfort is what they call a near miss; close to comfort is having a miss near
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Jul 18 17, 10:58
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missus is much better and surely more legal while particularly fine with the boss
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Jul 19 17, 08:03
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the boss knows how to sing but doesn’t have a band except for the ones on her third finger
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Jul 19 17, 14:02
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finger shown by driver from the no passing zone seemed to me somewhat unfriendly; I waved
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Jul 21 17, 13:59
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I waved my straight blonde hair until it got so long I was able to cut it for my wig
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Jul 21 17, 15:04
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your wig doesn't fit me because I'm no longer blonde with my bristly grey nubbins
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Jul 24 17, 17:58
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nubbins was a reindeer who was too young to fly and his name implied he was not horny
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Jul 25 17, 13:05
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horny little Rudolph found Santa's alcohol ingesting so much that his nose turned red
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Jul 26 17, 17:54
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turn dread to bravery when you can realize there is nothing in the darkness but fear
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Jul 29 17, 06:39
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butt-fear in the rest room makes user spread tissue all over toilet seat's surface to poo
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Jul 31 17, 08:15
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to poo out in public was always difficult with his hands covered in honey for Pooh
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Jul 31 17, 13:27
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for Pooh to use Charmin he had to wash his hands because the tissue kept sticking to them
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Aug 2 17, 23:47
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two to my ego
to them we are crazy or a little insane to keep this badinage going on so
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Aug 3 17, 13:03
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corrected:
on so few syllables you managed to add to my lexicon, 'cause I am bad in age!
original:
on so few words here you managed to add to my lexicon; I guess I am bad in age!
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Aug 4 17, 08:50
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an age in which we change the rules of a Cinquain by using two, three, six, nine, two is strange
The play on words was nice though.
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Aug 4 17, 10:16
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not strange to make mistakes at that time of morning when I could hardly keep my eyes open
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Aug 4 17, 16:14
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open the strangest doors with sleep deprivation and some weird things appear on your eye lids
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Aug 4 17, 22:47
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eye lids that were penned on when you were fast asleep would definitely freak you out awake
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Aug 7 17, 07:41
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a wake is sometimes held for sailors lost at sea unless they happen to fall in awake
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