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 Dec 6 03, 04:12
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose  |
Hi Alan,
 Forgive the informality in the title!  QUOTE SOMA WRONG AND SOMA WRITE It's ana Italiano Cinquaina Coma- (comma) toes in line three, not in a bed, compose themselves for sleep, if not, compose ! Love Alan This is far too clever for me in my state of health! Took me about seven minutes to figure this out. BRILLIANT!! Morning Dew dewdrops cling like jewels suspended from the web of a spider on the sundial then.. melt Best I can do till I wake up my friend.  Love Grace 
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Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner             |
  
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Dec 15 03, 21:08
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Self worth.
Where do you hide when I need you to be strong and confident? I am lost. Come back! ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner    |
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Jan 5 04, 18:33
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Teaching is intriguing, very enlightening; a great source of inspiration teams forth! ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 6 04, 11:39
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 20,442 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
perchance to quain ‘til I can scarce restrain myself through melting gossamer webbed site ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jan 17 04, 03:15
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Daniel
QUOTE to dream perchance to quain ‘til I can scarce restrain myself through melting gossamer webbed site Loved that one Daniel! [b]The Photograph
beneath the drab headscarf, lustrous, jet-black hair, once tossed sensually in sunshine turns grey ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 20 04, 02:33
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Candle light on your face animating your smile remembering your gentle touch I cry your soul mirrored brightly beside my reflection burnishing this winter morning I smile ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 20 04, 03:08
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 Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
in many ways, for old and young alike is rewarding as nothing else; freeing.  © All rights reserved as an unpulished work by D. Harris - 1/17/04 |
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Jan 20 04, 06:19
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Lovely ladies! :) :)
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 20 04, 07:37
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 20,442 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Ok, ladies... time to take the wraps off. You've seduced me to join in...
Rapt Kisses
kisses shared under wraps oft come with her; she… gives herself away delectably then melts © Daniel J Ricketts 20 Jan 2004 mused by Cary’s Kisses… ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jan 20 04, 19:04
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Cary?
What a poet that young man is, with a talent for leaving long lasting kudos. ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 20 04, 19:21
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Cary
Grant, unlike Hugh never played the villain. That's the difference between them on film ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Jan 21 04, 05:12
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Daniel,
Welcome aboard! What took you so long???  I love this rapt kissy-poo cinquain ... it's so .... it's so .... so ... um .... tantalizingly chocolate!! should I unwrap the warmth that covers me my unrapt bod would surely freeze, NOT melt! BUT Chocolate I'm surely not so rapt I will remain. The winter cold has dipped so low I'd freeze!  All rights reserved as an unpulished work by D. Harris 1/21/04 Dolly :snowflake: |
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Jan 21 04, 07:25
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 20,442 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 21 2004, 04:12) Hi Daniel, Welcome aboard! What took you so long??? I love this rapt kissy-poo cinquain ... it's so .... it's so .... so ... um .... tantalizingly chocolate!! should I unwrap the warmth that covers me my unrapt bod would surely freeze, NOT melt! BUT Chocolate I'm surely not so rapt I will remain. The winter cold has dipped so low I'd freeze! All rights reserved as an unpulished work by D. Harris 1/21/04 Dolly You mean back aboard? Someone threw me overboard a while back, and since I can't swim, it's a miracle I got back. Who was that who deep sixed me? Was it Alan? *smile* Well, Dolly... these two are excellent cinquains! VERY well constructed indeed. I doff my beret [ and nothin' else! ] to thee! eye'd freeze on chocolate at our local sweet shoppe if we're window-shopping today... so won't! ham on Light wry, Daniel
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Jan 21 04, 17:27
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Dear Daniel,
Deep six ? It was not eye that spied glass being thrown over a cold shoulder. Wee drown Six pack ! Love ALan |
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Jan 24 04, 17:49
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Your wealth
made me lay you... rotting six feet under. I water the fresh grass, hiding my smile. |
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Jan 24 04, 22:25
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Ohhhhhhh Dear Jessica!
Excellent cinquain, but what it says!! :jester: Ya done good, girl! Dolly :pharoah: |
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Jan 25 04, 02:27
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Dear Dove,
Naughty .....but nice  Greek Village Old men on ancient chairs sit in contemplation of long-lost loves gently twirling their beads Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 25 04, 07:40
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Dove @ Jan. 24 2004, 17:49) Your wealth made me lay you... rotting six feet under. I water the fresh grass, hiding my smile. OOOhhhhhhhh! Melike! :lovie: :dance: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 25 04, 07:41
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 02:27) Greek Village Old men on ancient chairs sit in contemplation of long-lost loves gently twirling their beads Grace Very good Grace! WAs this from a picture that inspired you? ~Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 27 04, 06:21
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 20,442 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 01:27) Greek Village Old men on ancient chairs sit in contemplation of long-lost loves gently twirling their beads Grace Entranced
distaff worn keys in hand locked in contemplation over new-found love, slow turns entrance © M Lee Dickens’ son (Daniel) 27 Jan 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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