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CINQUAIN:  From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."  

The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.

The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.

The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests:  Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines.  Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.

The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.

The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:

TRIAD

These be
Three silent things:
The falling snow... the hour
Before the dawn... the mouth of one
Just dead.


Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.

Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you!  cool.gif  :p


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- Cleo_Serapis   Cinquain   Aug 3 03, 10:06
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 19 2003, 01:16)Dear Grace ...   Nov 19 03, 04:14
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, Trust all your nasty littl...   Nov 21 03, 01:56
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 21 2003, 00:56)Good Morn...   Nov 21 03, 04:20
- - Dove   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 21 2003, 02:20)Rock...   Nov 21 03, 20:00
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 21 2003, 19:00)Laughing at...   Nov 22 03, 08:01
- - Athena   Can anyone get in on this act?  Must one tie their...   Nov 25 03, 07:25
- - Cybele   Hi all. Will it spoil the fun to post just an ord...   Dec 2 03, 08:10
- -   Dear Grace This is all Daniel's fault. I post...   Dec 2 03, 11:33
- - Cybele   Well, thank you Sir Knight I have the urge to w...   Dec 2 03, 11:45
- - AMETHYST   Does that... old fairy tale still tell of maidens...   Dec 2 03, 12:12
- -   Dear Liz Nice thought, line 4 1 syll short ! ...   Dec 2 03, 12:42
- - AMETHYST   Hi Alan, Oooops, I cannot believe I did that.. m...   Dec 2 03, 13:29
- - Cybele   Where are you? my voice calls out to you but Wint...   Dec 2 03, 17:28
- - Cybele   Good Morning Sir Knight I bestow you with the ne...   Dec 6 03, 02:27
- - Cybele   Hi Liz,     Frenchmen, I thought handsome with t...   Dec 6 03, 02:34
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- -   Dear Grace, Errrrrr, um, yes. So glad you spotted...   Dec 6 03, 02:48
- - Cybele   Great riposte Alan!!   I am feeling a li...   Dec 6 03, 03:00
- -   Dear Grace SOMA WRONG AND SOMA WRITE It's ana...   Dec 6 03, 03:21
- - Cybele   Hi Alan, Forgive the informality in the title...   Dec 6 03, 04:12
- - Cleo_Serapis   Self worth. Where do you hide when I need you to b...   Dec 15 03, 21:08
- - Cleo_Serapis   Teaching is intriguing, very enlightening; a great...   Jan 5 04, 18:33
- - JustDaniel   to dream perchance to quain ‘til I can scarce rest...   Jan 6 04, 11:39
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel QUOTE to dream perchance to quain ‘t...   Jan 17 04, 03:15
- - Cybele   Candle light on your face animating your smile rem...   Jan 20 04, 02:33
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- - Cleo_Serapis   Lovely ladies! :) :)   Jan 20 04, 06:19
- - JustDaniel   Ok, ladies... time to take the wraps off.  You...   Jan 20 04, 07:37
- - Cleo_Serapis   Cary? What a poet that young man is, with a talent...   Jan 20 04, 19:04
- -   Cary Grant, unlike Hugh never played the villain. ...   Jan 20 04, 19:21
- - Athena   Hi Daniel, Welcome aboard!  What took you so ...   Jan 21 04, 05:12
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 21 2004, 04:12)Hi Daniel...   Jan 21 04, 07:25
- -   Dear Daniel, Deep six ? It was not eye that spied...   Jan 21 04, 17:27
- - Dove   Your wealth made me lay you... rotting six feet un...   Jan 24 04, 17:49
- - Athena   Ohhhhhhh Dear Jessica!   Excellent cinqu...   Jan 24 04, 22:25
- - Cybele   Dear Dove, Naughty .....but nice Greek Villa...   Jan 25 04, 02:27
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Dove @ Jan. 24 2004, 17:49)Your wealth...   Jan 25 04, 07:40
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 02:27) Greek V...   Jan 25 04, 07:41
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 01:27)Greek Vil...   Jan 27 04, 06:21
- - Cleo_Serapis   You two are going strong! Grace - have a fish! ...   Jan 27 04, 19:55
- - Cybele   Hello Cleo, Hope the migraine clears up quickly. ...   Jan 28 04, 03:41
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- - Athena   Hi Jessica, I enjoyed reading your fine cinquain...   Jan 31 04, 03:25
- - Athena   Life's Changes Sometimes things can happen to...   Feb 4 04, 20:24
- - Cybele   Hello Dove, Overused Movie Scene QUOTE Starter w...   Feb 5 04, 03:45
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- - Cybele   Alone silence overwhelming all sound, clutches my...   Feb 18 04, 03:23
- - Athena   Ohhhhh Grace, This beautiful cinquain tears at my...   Feb 18 04, 03:32
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly, I'm glad this touched you.  It...   Feb 18 04, 04:02
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- - Athena   Very well done, Jessica!  .......... and ...   Mar 13 04, 06:02
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- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Dove @ Mar. 24 2004, 00:03)Spring Buzz...   Mar 24 04, 06:22
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- - Cleo_Serapis   :pharoah2   Apr 8 04, 17:48
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- - Cleo_Serapis   Looks to me like there ARE words dear Zeus! Good...   Apr 24 04, 13:06
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- - heartsong7   delightful Daniel...love this...fair Miss't of...   Jul 19 04, 12:59
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