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CINQUAIN: From the French, meaning "a grouping of five."
The Cinquain has five lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables, respectively, with a total syllabic count of 22.
The cinquain should have no more than two full sentences.
The Handbook of Poetic Forms suggests: Do not add words to fill out this form; write with feeling, but do not allow your writing to become cloyingly sweet; build toward a climax and put a surprise into your last two lines. Rather than parts of speech, be concerned with thoughts and images.
The cinquain came to popularity by Adelaide Crapsy, who devised the form back in the early 1900's. She was so influenced by the Japanese forms, tanka and haiku, that she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.
The most famous of the few Crapsy cinquains from her The Complete Poems is:
TRIAD
These be Three silent things: The falling snow... the hour Before the dawn... the mouth of one Just dead.
Cinquains, though they have never become very popular, have always attracted a number of poets who are still developing the form.
Why not try your own here in this thread! Come on! We dare you! :p
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Cleo_Serapis Cinquain Aug 3 03, 10:06 JustDaniel QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 19 2003, 01:16)Dear Grace
... Nov 19 03, 04:14 Cybele Good Morning Daniel,
Trust all your nasty littl... Nov 21 03, 01:56 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 21 2003, 00:56)Good Morn... Nov 21 03, 04:20 Dove QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 21 2003, 02:20)Rock... Nov 21 03, 20:00 JustDaniel QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 21 2003, 19:00)Laughing at... Nov 22 03, 08:01 Athena Can anyone get in on this act? Must one tie their... Nov 25 03, 07:25 Cybele Hi all.
Will it spoil the fun to post just an ord... Dec 2 03, 08:10 Dear Grace
This is all Daniel's fault. I post... Dec 2 03, 11:33 Cybele Well, thank you Sir Knight
I have the urge to w... Dec 2 03, 11:45 AMETHYST Does that...
old fairy tale
still tell of maidens... Dec 2 03, 12:12 Dear Liz
Nice thought, line 4 1 syll short !
... Dec 2 03, 12:42 AMETHYST Hi Alan,
Oooops, I cannot believe I did that.. m... Dec 2 03, 13:29 Cybele Where are you?
my voice
calls out to you
but Wint... Dec 2 03, 17:28 Cybele Good Morning Sir Knight
I bestow you with the ne... Dec 6 03, 02:27 Cybele Hi Liz,
Frenchmen,
I thought handsome
with t... Dec 6 03, 02:34 Cybele Hello Dolly,
( I do like saying that, it makes ... Dec 6 03, 02:43 Cybele Unseen graces
sleepless..
summer’s perfumes
drift... Dec 6 03, 02:47 Dear Grace,
Errrrrr, um, yes. So glad you spotted... Dec 6 03, 02:48 Cybele Great riposte Alan!!
I am feeling a li... Dec 6 03, 03:00 Dear Grace
SOMA WRONG AND SOMA WRITE
It's ana... Dec 6 03, 03:21 Cybele Hi Alan,
Forgive the informality in the title... Dec 6 03, 04:12 Cleo_Serapis Self worth.
Where do you hide
when I need you to b... Dec 15 03, 21:08 Cleo_Serapis Teaching
is intriguing,
very enlightening;
a great... Jan 5 04, 18:33 JustDaniel to dream
perchance to quain
‘til I can scarce rest... Jan 6 04, 11:39 Cybele Hello Daniel
QUOTE to dream
perchance to quain
‘t... Jan 17 04, 03:15 Cybele Candle
light on your face
animating your smile
rem... Jan 20 04, 02:33 Athena Playing,
in many ways,
for old and young alike
is ... Jan 20 04, 03:08 Cleo_Serapis Lovely ladies! :) :) Jan 20 04, 06:19 JustDaniel Ok, ladies... time to take the wraps off. You... Jan 20 04, 07:37 Cleo_Serapis Cary?
What a poet
that young man is, with a
talent... Jan 20 04, 19:04 Cary
Grant, unlike Hugh
never played the villain.
... Jan 20 04, 19:21 Athena Hi Daniel,
Welcome aboard! What took you so ... Jan 21 04, 05:12 JustDaniel QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 21 2004, 04:12)Hi Daniel... Jan 21 04, 07:25 Dear Daniel,
Deep six ?
It was not eye
that spied... Jan 21 04, 17:27 Dove Your wealth
made me lay you...
rotting six feet un... Jan 24 04, 17:49 Athena Ohhhhhhh Dear Jessica!
Excellent cinqu... Jan 24 04, 22:25 Cybele Dear Dove,
Naughty .....but nice
Greek Villa... Jan 25 04, 02:27 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Dove @ Jan. 24 2004, 17:49)Your wealth... Jan 25 04, 07:40 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 02:27)
Greek V... Jan 25 04, 07:41 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 25 2004, 01:27)Greek Vil... Jan 27 04, 06:21 Cleo_Serapis You two are going strong!
Grace - have a fish! ... Jan 27 04, 19:55 Cybele Hello Cleo,
Hope the migraine clears up quickly. ... Jan 28 04, 03:41 Athena Presidential Campaigns
Voting,
which choice we ma... Jan 28 04, 03:58 Cybele Never alone
on waking
my sad fingers
trace your... Jan 29 04, 02:31 Dove Overused Movie Scene
Starter
won't turn over... Jan 30 04, 20:30 Athena Hi Jessica,
I enjoyed reading your fine cinquain... Jan 31 04, 03:25 Athena Life's Changes
Sometimes
things can happen
to... Feb 4 04, 20:24 Cybele Hello Dove,
Overused Movie Scene
QUOTE Starter
w... Feb 5 04, 03:45 Cybele Hello Dolly,
Life's Changes
QUOTE Sometime... Feb 5 04, 03:54 Cybele Alone
silence
overwhelming
all sound, clutches my... Feb 18 04, 03:23 Athena Ohhhhh Grace,
This beautiful cinquain tears at my... Feb 18 04, 03:32 Cybele Hello Dolly,
I'm glad this touched you. It... Feb 18 04, 04:02 Athena Visualizing
I sit
contemplating
returning to your... Feb 20 04, 02:11 Athena Wowww your Ladyship, you're a tough act to fol... Feb 22 04, 03:06 Athena Searching
A key
is what I seek;
to see into your ... Feb 22 04, 04:04 Dove First Person Interview
Woman:
freckle speckled,
a... Mar 12 04, 04:37 Athena Very well done, Jessica! .......... and ... Mar 13 04, 06:02 Athena New Self
She's high
on life and love,
leaving... Mar 13 04, 06:10 Zeus²
Arch de Color
Cloudy,
few sunshowers,
gentle b... Mar 16 04, 19:27 Dear Larry,
Like ! Inspired me to write yours... Mar 17 04, 01:57 HENNY PENNY'S GENETIC ENGINEERING
Pennies
fal... Mar 17 04, 02:10 Dove Spring Buzz
He flew,
sipping nectar
and tasting ... Mar 24 04, 00:03 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Dove @ Mar. 24 2004, 00:03)Spring Buzz... Mar 24 04, 06:22 Zeus² Bunnies,
hopping around,
started with only two, ... Mar 24 04, 11:56 Cleo_Serapis Peter
Cottontail is
hopping your way with eggs
and... Mar 31 04, 06:24 Dove To Feel Like a Woman
Perfume;
rain showers mist
... Apr 8 04, 17:18 Cleo_Serapis :pharoah2 Apr 8 04, 17:48 Zeus² Output
Past month
mind was a blank,
ideas come an... Apr 24 04, 12:54 Cleo_Serapis Looks to me like there ARE words dear Zeus!
Good... Apr 24 04, 13:06 JustDaniel winter curtsey
snow white
wakes sleepily
as morn... Jun 29 04, 04:10 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Just Daniel @ June 29 2004, 05:10)wint... Jun 29 04, 05:04 JustDaniel Thanks, m'Lady!
All my silly practice occ... Jun 29 04, 06:27 HALF-FREE
Weekends
not on payroll -
my wish fulfi... Jul 11 04, 15:09 JustDaniel time 'n' a half
weekend
time, 'n... Jul 12 04, 11:07 heartsong7 If you
have love to give
and will accept it too,
t... Jul 17 04, 19:56 JustDaniel Lovely thought... and wistful rhyme too. Nic... Jul 18 04, 02:19 heartsong7 delightful Daniel...love this...fair Miss't of... Jul 19 04, 12:59 JustDaniel QUOTE (heartsong7 @ July 19 2004, 12:59)delig... Jul 27 04, 03:59 JustDaniel summer’s end
yellow
buttoned daisies
pout from iv... Aug 3 04, 06:44 Cathy I'm not sure I like this form..It seems so bri... Nov 11 04, 12:23 JustDaniel lost thoughts
may be captured
with feeling in cinq... Nov 11 04, 14:11 Zeus² It's Time
Amuse
yourself dear words
you cann... Jan 22 05, 19:20 JustDaniel timing
is everything,
leaving me with nothing;
why... Jan 25 05, 11:26 Zeus² Keeping Company
Oh' yes,
taken to bed,
young... Apr 20 05, 09:09 Zeus² Country Fair
Midway
concessions: rides,
subs, ... Apr 21 05, 17:51 JustDaniel heart burn
overcomes sense
when hungry eyes alig... May 16 05, 09:49 JustDaniel Dyslexic ADHD
thinking
outside the box:
eye teeth... Jun 15 05, 13:00 JustDaniel breathless
piglet
who built with sticks
teamed wi... Jul 18 05, 15:36 JustDaniel plan a head
embrace
your pocketbook
orthodontical... Jul 18 05, 15:44 Cleo_Serapis To be
proud of oneself
on the inside as much
as yo... Aug 13 05, 11:32 JustDaniel Anatomy of a Firing
a head
that’s been confused
h... Aug 28 05, 15:27 Cleo_Serapis Resolution One
Resolve
to invest time
sharing the... Dec 31 05, 17:57 AMETHYST Hey Lori,
I love the idea of presenting resoluti... Dec 31 05, 21:36 Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz and a very HAPPY NEW YEAR to you!
I love... Dec 31 05, 21:45 AMETHYST I am glad you liked the suggestion. On to 2...
... Dec 31 05, 22:52 JustDaniel in vest
since it is cold
when all that sharers do
... Jan 13 06, 21:29 JustDaniel in vain
Lazarus tried
to figure out the date
when ... Mar 4 11, 09:25 Larry This looks like fun. Probably much harder than it... Mar 5 11, 23:02 Larry Might this play on a word be construed to be a Cin... Mar 16 11, 09:08 JustDaniel doctrine:
men tarryin'
over Biblical facts
unt... Mar 18 11, 08:46
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