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Mar 6 16, 01:42
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row on row of berries needing harvest but it's back-breaking work to pick the sweet fruit; he'd done what he could himself then farmer spends days searching out local help, but none would bend the knee
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Mar 7 16, 19:00
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kneed the ground while searching for one more row with some ripe berries still growing on the vine but all of them were consumed so I guess my search was fruitless because I could not find one non-et
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Mar 10 16, 09:16
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et my fruit all alone out in the field while waiting for you but since you didn't show I just kept stuffing them in all the way through the final row where I woke up just before you came
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Mar 11 16, 14:23
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came to help you pick fruit and would assist but I failed to find the ninth row to start on so I could work my way back to meet you in the middle rows but found you stuffed and asleep on ate
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Mar 13 16, 17:38
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eight fruit rows because one had been left bare; 'twas number seven which has now been planted although there are no berries; they won't mature until next year -- were afraid that we wouldn't find help
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Mar 15 16, 08:29
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help is hard to acquire when work’s involved and high pay is not but if perspiration is any part of the deal it is nearly impossible to find one with pep that’s worth his salt.
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Mar 27 16, 03:29
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salt has taste but hides it from the public; he only comes out when he is lifted up and shaken vigorously to release his tasteful dry humor
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Mar 27 16, 18:45
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more nuance of good taste preparing some quahogs you desire rather than using sage, sea-foods with lots of salt make thirst a good reason or excuse; unless you don’t like steamed clams with ale
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Apr 6 16, 14:49
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ale for what's ailing you... or at least some hold to that adage; for me it would add age to this already stretched skin; not sure it could expand much more than my huge belly can stand or slump
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Apr 11 16, 09:24
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“slumped over the keyboard searching for words” will most likely be etched upon my tombstone and hopefully, someone will finish that last Cinquain with the credit given to who’s been a- “mused”
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Apr 22 16, 02:24
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muse etching on the grave winds up in jail for marring the stone; no one seems to believe she had some relationship with anyone around, much less with the stiff who joined the underground
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Apr 22 16, 23:48
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ground into a powder, nice coffee beans produce more flavor because interaction with the boiling hot water permits contact with more pieces which you won’t have to strain through you teeth
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Apr 29 16, 02:23
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teeth can grind to powder a piece of toast that has no butter but who wants to put such a piece of food in his mouth? a small pat of that cream makes it taste much more uneconomical
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Apr 30 16, 15:19
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cal. is short for some things like calories and although butter being slathered on toast will make it taste much better the danger lies in bread itself as carbohydrates change to sugar
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May 2 16, 10:47
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gar are fish that may grow to more than six feet (but with no feet) and extremely long jaws and teeth with which you do not want ever to have started fights because you cannot win in such wars
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May 2 16, 13:43
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wars with fish can be won with a small stick which you light and throw into lakes or large streams then you take a big dip net and gather which kind and what size you wish to cook and then eat in peace.
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May 2 16, 23:50
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peas after you had tossed your mysterious exploding red stick may cause stomach troubles, trout bursting forth from your gut pretending that they'll take a pea... but spilling out piecemeal on the floor
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May 5 16, 14:52
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floor debate about sticks, they don’t explode but they are toxic like the Makore wood which affects nervous systems causing disorientation and the confused fish float to the top
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May 6 16, 04:29
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stop before you begin when you're afraid and you won't ever accomplish anything; of course sometimes when you go your achievements may be so poor that you'd be better off if you'd stopped
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May 8 16, 08:24
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stopped because of failure is giving up, admitting defeat; but through trial and error one overcomes many things and eventually attains a modicum of success in life
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