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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hello all!
 I for one am trying to learn HOW to SHOW a scene more than TELL a scene. Why not help us all out and give an example here of exactly HOW one could do that? Let's start with a few 'items' to write about and see what responses come to this thread? There is a door (half-open) leading to ?? (WHERE)?? Choose a character name. WHAT is this person doing? Instead of: She walked slowly to the door, half-opened, with light flickering beyond... HOW would you describe this scene by SHOW rather than TELL? Cheers! ~Cleo 
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Cleo_Serapis Short Story Exercise 5 Jan 7 05, 06:25 
Jox Inside the realm of fantasy, her mirrored image sp... Jan 15 05, 08:19 Toumai Hi Lori,
I am a little confused here, wondering w... Jan 15 05, 10:26 Cleo_Serapis Hi.
No - I just wanted you to use your imaginatio... Jan 17 05, 05:31 Cleo_Serapis Arese waded to a stop in the crystalline waters. M... Jan 19 05, 05:24 Jox Hi Lori - another microstory - and pathos too... Jan 19 05, 12:23 Cleo_Serapis Here's a great article on Show v. Tell...
Show,... Feb 5 05, 10:35 Nina Hi Lori
I've just been reading through this f... Feb 5 05, 14:00 Toumai Hi Lori,
Many thanks for the links - I've rea... Feb 5 05, 14:09 Jox Nina,
Fran's idea is great - it's the ide... Feb 5 05, 17:48 Nina Hi Fran and James
Thanks for the encouragement. ... Feb 5 05, 18:16 Jox Hi Nina,
May I suggest that you take a look here.... Feb 5 05, 18:24 Nina Hi James
Thanks for the link. I think I ge... Feb 5 05, 18:50 
Jox Thank you Nina.
Much appreciated.
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