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Dec 9 04, 15:43
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Dear Jox,
Ha, made you sweat, did I !
As it happens, I was very flattened by your chosing my poem to illustrate !
I do think yho that the reversed text simply does not indicate what you want it too, having read your illus AND explans in detail before my last post !
I like the more solid flakes nearer the bottom, but think there should be some (a few) further up as well, and "Street lights struggle to shine" should be cone-shaped, with the last words yellow-pooled, you can adjust the letter sizes to make the cone good.
Perhaps the grey square could be a window, rather than a house.
All these are just ideas, as I think the poem is mine, so I think the illus should be yours ....
As you say , the text is integral.
Love Alan
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Dec 10 04, 06:50
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I'm curious where will you find black printing paper? If not you will use a tremendous amount of ink printing that cover. It is awesome, however the ink issue could squelch it.
Charon
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Dec 10 04, 06:57
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Alan - thank you very much; I'll reply to you a bit later, if I may
Cathy - Thanks!
Butch, hi...
I hadn't assumed this was going to be printed at home; thought it was screen or litho - digital. If one attempted to print it on an ink jet it would, as you indicate, be a disaster.
Sorry, I'm used to sending my stuff away to a printing firm... I assumed Lori did that; don't know. Lori?
I also thought it was an inside illustration to one poem - much smaller than the original. I have left no bleed area (which would be necessary for a full page).
Moreover, it was only a suggestion - showing the style.
Thanks for liking it, though.
James.
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Dec 11 04, 09:30
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QUOTE (Jox @ Dec. 10 2004, 06:57) Butch, hi...
I hadn't assumed this was going to be printed at home; thought it was screen or litho - digital. If one attempted to print it on an ink jet it would, as you indicate, be a disaster.
Sorry, I'm used to sending my stuff away to a printing firm... I assumed Lori did that; don't know. Lori?
I also thought it was an inside illustration to one poem - much smaller than the original. I have left no bleed area (which would be necessary for a full page).
Moreover, it was only a suggestion - showing the style.
Thanks for liking it, though.
James. Hi all.
James - I do all the design and printing of our chapbooks here at home on a commercial laserjet printer.
I Do try and stay away from dark backgrounds if possible and YES -these artwork ideas and submissions will go on the inside of our chapbook.
Hey Butch - do you have any ideas for the cover design?
Of course the title will be something like:
MOSAIC MUSINGS LLC Holiday Classic 2004
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Dec 11 04, 09:32
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QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Dec. 10 2004, 18:32) Hey Lori~ Of course if you need my help or artistic flair, I am more than willing!
Let me know. Pen and ink, pencil, charcoal, etc.....your call!
Happy holidays. Lindi Of course Miss Lindi! :lovie:
If you see a particular submission that you'd like to draw something for, please mention it here....
James has started a design for Alan's poem, "Silent Night, Vienna"....
HUGS! Lori :xmas: :dance:
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Dec 12 04, 07:13
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OK, I think I know what I need to now. Thanks all.
Thanks Alan for your suggestions...
Next week I'll try to produce something based on my original, now I know more parameters and suggestions.
I am very envious, though, that Lori has a commercial colour laser printer. My Crimble stocking is not big enough, obviously... must obtain a larger size!
From the info given it seems bleed areas are irrelevant.
One final q to Lori - what size would you expect a poetry illustration to be (as printed in the book, that is)?
Thanks, James.
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Dec 12 04, 07:48
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QUOTE (Jox @ Dec. 12 2004, 07:13) One final q to Lori - what size would you expect a poetry illustration to be (as printed in the book, that is)?
Thanks, James. Hi James.
I generally make them around 300 x 200 or 400 x 600 (OR I take a larger image and shrink it down).....
About that stocking..... remember what we discussed recently? Expenses - printer and ink cartridges included....
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Dec 12 04, 08:33
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Hi Lori / Butch,
Thanks...
I assumed you shrank larger images for quality.
Yes the costs are not cheap, I know. (I've been round various dealers of late looking a colour lasers).
I use an Epson colour photo inkjet and an Hewlett-Packard monochrome laser for proofing - and direct printing if I ever need that facility. (As well as general work for myself). No printer is perfect for proofing really because the CMYK never seems to match that of printers. I seem to end-up hitting myself over the head with Pantone swatches!
I would like a colour laser to take small jobs in-house. Some people want notices and posters yesterday and it would be great for that. Your idea of publishing also has appeal but it would take the equipment which you have.
Colour lasers are now "cheap" (£250-£500 here - were £5,000 last time I seriously looked at them) but the sting is in that consumables tail - beware anyone!
There is a great deal of labour involved too and, for production, it is easier for me to just hit a button and send the material to the printer in Nottingham (150 miles from here) than struggle with paper, toner cartridges and so on. In the old days when everything had to be pasted-up on paper and posted it was a real pain but that "send" button is really attractive.
For interest, maybe: "My" Nottingham Printers
Nevertheless, for small jobs and in-house inaccurate proofing, a colour laser would be just the thing. As I said, though, I start to be tempted to use it for much more and that would be the sting.
Thanks for the info, cheers.
James.
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Dec 12 04, 18:55
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QUOTE (Charon @ Dec. 12 2004, 08:01) James and Lori,
You are right with the commerical color laserjet. The printer is cheap the ink requires a mortgage. This fall I created a 400 page story of my family history called Cousins. Printed 20 of them and broke the bank. The cartridges are such small things. I found myself printing in sections, so I could do the illustrations on one and use by laser for the text.
Lori,
Unfortunately I am not an artist, just a good layout man. I can take others drawings and be creative. I have Corel Draw, Jasc Paintshop, plus others. I'll see what I can do. My wife is the one with the talent as you can see with her illustrations in Jingle Bells. By the way sold or given away almost one hundred books so far. Nearly completed next years story.
Happy Holidays
Charon  Hahahahahhaha - you are so right Butch!
Well the printer wasn't that cheap but the ink cartridges are a fortune! And one needs FOUR to get all colors right! :wall: Soon we'll probably need to stock up but so far, still on the originals....
I seem to have created a certain pattern to designing our chapbooks. :detective: I copy the content in from Word to Publisher first, placing the tiles as best that I can use the space provided and choose the font next. Once that's complete, I then go searching for images (yes James, larger at first, then I shrink them down using Jasc Paintshop Pro) to fill in any white space that may be left to work with. The problem for me is when the image is small to begin with, I can't really enlarge them much as it distorts and ends up looking pretty crappy, so I will then look for a substitute... :speechless:
For our "Spectacle" short story Butch, I took real images and turned them into chalk art of the Colleseum & Gladiators which was fun! We'll have to get back to that one soon..... :vic:
Yes, Lou did a great job in "Jingle Bells" as the illustrator and you as the writer. Thanks again for the copy, I've read it twice now! :present:
WOWOWOWOW! Congrats on your book success thus far!
Cheers! Cleo :cloud9:
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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