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Apr 7 12, 00:49
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BOTTOM DRAWER
Cleaning up after dogs is the core that defines hate for friends, footed, four pleading eyes and a whine that go on, all the time's why I won't have them come in the door
Alan
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Apr 7 12, 17:49
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We have one that's allowed in the house but she really belongs to my spouse. A small sheltie for sheep; we have none... but I keep my mouth shut. To have peace, I don't grouse!
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Apr 7 12, 18:22
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A' WRESTED
It is just as well you do not grouse as you potter all around the house for it's not your domain wife wrested from you her gain you know whether you're man, or a mouse
Alan
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Apr 7 12, 23:04
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A louse or a mouse or a man? I tell ya, prepare a good plan. It depends on the missus, if she kisses or hisses, bring chocolates – vanilla pecan.
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Apr 8 12, 00:15
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Chocolates may be brought as a gift for occasions or to mend a rift caused by macho display; "I'm a man" you might say but there's no love tonight if she's miffed.
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Apr 8 12, 02:10
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LOL !
PASSION, KILLER
Bring chocolates with pecans, if intent is to arouse normally latent (dead) passion in a wife inject semblance of life deep investment too soon to be spent
Alan
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Apr 8 12, 11:52
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Deep investment may not be the game if chocolates won’t kindle the flame and the missus stays miffed over some bunny gift you had bought her for Easter. A shame!
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Apr 8 12, 14:18
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"It's a shame!" said the miser who bought all his candy on sale. He had thought it was cheaper to pay after the holiday. With cream-egg on his face, he was caught.
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Apr 8 12, 16:48
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With a smile on his face he was caught cuz he'd eaten more eggs than he ought he was banged up by rights for more than one nights lucky t'wasn't the bucket he bought
Alan
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Apr 9 12, 07:40
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No, it wasn't the bucket he kicked; at the Easter egg hunt he was licked by his grandsons who got more sweets than they ought -- but with his help -- and many hand-picked.
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Apr 9 12, 12:46
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ADDLED
Eggs were hand-picked, and hand-painted by mums and aunts til they feinted then ignored by the kids soon to be on the skids with chocolate addition teinted
Alan
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Apr 9 12, 13:28
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Alan, sometimes you're losing the beat of the THREE PULSES, THREE, with repeat after two lines pulse TWO, then you're through... and your strange use of 'feint' is not meet! Lightly, Daniel
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Apr 9 12, 14:00
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If, with an epee I choose to faint you justifiably think it quaint as I stretch for a word struggle towards the absurd good grammarian surely I ain't
Alan
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Apr 9 12, 14:21
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Larn ta speak from yer Grammar an' Aunts or ya must by the seat o' yer pants. We has all larned ta talk jest the same as we walk when we's wee ones with giggles an' chants.
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Apr 9 12, 17:14
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Only the US rhymes aunts with pants it as a nation completely enchants folks, English is the Queen's tell that to your marines but I doubt that you'll ever recant
Alan
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Apr 9 12, 23:50
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Garblimey, me stiff upper lip is getting a bit of a whip from you co-loony-als and I thought we was pals. Tell THAT to those guys on the ship!
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Apr 10 12, 01:48
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Tell this to those guys on Ma Earth ship climate change is merely a small blip on the radar of life not worth too much strife and NOT worth a psychedelic trip
Alan
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Apr 10 12, 14:22
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ingest psychedelic and trip... and especially if it's not scrip; you will not want to go where the light is aglow; be prepared to be caught in its grip
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Apr 10 12, 16:34
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Be prepared to be caught in the grip of a person who's wearing a slip remember, t'was your choice to scream - in a high voice you're embarked on discovery trip
Alan
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Apr 11 12, 07:19
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Alluvion Delusion?
Do you think my discovery's a lark? Don't you see that I've peeled off my bark to disclose what's inside? I no longer will hide that I stowed away on the ark.
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
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