 Cinquain Train, Interactive Cinquain - Come play! |
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hi Folks~
 Following Dolly's lead here and after reading and interacting with you all in the Haiku and Tetractys Train threads, I've decided to start a SEPARATE thread for an Interactive Cinquain Train. Same rules (to quote Dolly): I'll write a cinquain, and then the next person begins theirs with the last line of mine, the next person begins theirs with the last line on that one, etc. They do NOT have to be on the same subject, but they CAN be if you wish. It's all up to YOU! Whattaya think? Shall we give it a go? How about attempting to write one a day for 15 or 30 days in a row? Anyone game to commit to this endeavor? I'll begin this thread: Angels;
behest His love. Seldom seen, always felt, everlasting serenity. Guide us. ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Cleo_Serapis Cinquain Train Feb 1 04, 20:11 
Cleo_Serapis I know
today will be
filled with exciting things
t... Jun 16 04, 05:11 JustDaniel renewed
acquaintances
perhaps might give a hint
ab... Jun 16 04, 06:06 EIGHT
Oars move
in and out in
rythmic perfect bal... Jun 16 04, 06:15 JustDaniel splashes
for a wader
must suffice... no matter
tha... Jun 16 04, 07:01 Zeus˛ Reaching,
higher, farther,
beyond the wildest drea... Jun 16 04, 10:34 Cleo_Serapis The thrill
of responding
with a touch of humor,
a ... Jun 17 04, 05:16 LIMBO
Hell ? Oh,
that space between
my words and ... Jun 17 04, 05:27 Zeus˛ If one
see's your blue eyes,
intense, piercing... Jun 17 04, 05:51 AMETHYST HELLO, Larry, Alan, Daniel and LORI!
I am al... Jun 17 04, 08:13 Zeus˛ Home plate,
shaped like a house,
three strikes, ou... Jun 17 04, 18:40 Cleo_Serapis Heroes
come in all shapes,
sizes, ages, colors.
Wh... Jun 18 04, 05:24 COMMERCIAL ANACHRONISM
Wake Yule !
Logged thi... Jun 18 04, 05:59 Zeus˛ New wave
merchandisers,
getting an early start,
fe... Jun 18 04, 06:28 Cleo_Serapis Mixed up!
Salads just ain't
the same unless they'r... Jun 20 04, 08:29 Zeus˛ Undress,
untoss, unshake,
unadorn, unburden,
unacu... Jun 20 04, 09:50 EXPENSIVE AT LAST !
(as opposed to "Free at la... Jun 20 04, 10:39 JustDaniel hole life
for many snakes
whether in grass or out
... Jun 20 04, 15:04 Cleo_Serapis 'Til bit
enjoy nature...
Hammocks await in shade,
... Jun 20 04, 15:40 JustDaniel back to basics
back yard
could have a dent
if rot... Jun 20 04, 16:22 Cleo_Serapis Back side
front, sideways too
up and down - you ca... Jun 22 04, 05:18 DIRTY OLD MAN
thin 'air
on thickish head
I... Jun 22 04, 08:23 JustDaniel granite
formed as a head
seems marbled at the eyes... Jun 22 04, 10:26 Cleo_Serapis Lassie
Come home, won't you?
It's been far too lon... Jun 22 04, 16:12 Zeus˛ Around
the bend
success waiting,
publish book, ta... Jun 22 04, 17:41 JustDaniel dreamin'
of all that stuff
I wake up in nightm... Jun 22 04, 18:49 Athena Scribbles
are what I draw
no matter how I try
to c... Jun 22 04, 23:55 Zeus˛ To lure,
by semantics,
metaphorical phrase,
verbs,... Jun 26 04, 19:16 WRONG ERR
Right err,
or wrong result ?
Bet err i... Jun 27 04, 09:12 Cleo_Serapis Perfect
portions of crowd-
pleasing purple pansies... Jun 28 04, 05:16 JustDaniel wry zing
she mustered hot
with her ham sandwiched ... Jun 28 04, 06:51 AN ALBUM OF PABLUM
Digest
for all readers
provide... Jun 28 04, 07:38 JustDaniel short snips
can be deadly
when the scissors are po... Jun 28 04, 08:00 Cleo_Serapis Passage
on Cleo's barge
will be granted to those
w... Jun 28 04, 16:26 JustDaniel Bow down;
nature's low limb
over tributary
jus... Jun 28 04, 16:49 Zeus˛ Hi Lo,
stand, kneel,
better yet, crouch,
then jum... Jun 28 04, 17:29 WRLD'TH WETHT ENU-BURR THANWITH
Made it ... Jun 28 04, 17:35 Zeus˛ Non Thick
Devour,
get some.
teflon coated preserv... Jun 28 04, 17:57 JustDaniel smoothies
go down quite well
on summer days like t... Jun 28 04, 18:02 I'M GETTING TARRED AND FEATHERED IN THE MORNIN... Jun 29 04, 01:49 JustDaniel your cot
was made for one
so never add a mate
espe... Jun 29 04, 03:50 Zeus˛ Jon Ra,
that was his name,
had his own special cot... Jun 29 04, 06:42 JustDaniel kapish!
I think I know
the type of sailor slin... Jun 29 04, 07:20 Zeus˛ Aye, Aye !!
walk the plank, huh,
just scut... Jun 29 04, 18:29 JustDaniel aweigh
away from home
and in ports all hottin... Jun 30 04, 08:05 Zeus˛ The wall,
can be short-- tall
found, either side o... Jun 30 04, 17:43 NEEDS MUST ....
Needs proles -
communism -
to wor... Jul 1 04, 01:31 Zeus˛ That's it,
the solution,
total new line of tho... Jul 1 04, 17:26 JustDaniel gnu looked
at antelope
and wanted to elope
but... Jul 2 04, 05:38 Zeus˛ Fauning,
lyonizing,
all a gaiter agap,
the inland ... Jul 2 04, 18:55 JustDaniel storm clouds
a dawning sky
with images so dark
... Jul 4 04, 05:29 INHERENT
To mourn
perchance to grieve
to be sad f... Jul 4 04, 07:00 JustDaniel no chance
I'll ever bet
unless I know the end
... Jul 4 04, 14:36 Zeus˛ fuel for
thought, a sure thing,
watch the wheel go... Jul 5 04, 07:27 SUCCOUR
Succour
for her kittens
six little balls ... Jul 5 04, 10:04 Zeus˛ Sip this,
scotch on the rocks,
several glasses of ... Jul 5 04, 19:24 Cleo_Serapis Don't drive
after eye test
when 'glau drops reign ... Jul 5 04, 19:38 Zeus˛
High Noon,
poor sight, rub eyes,
steer c... Jul 6 04, 17:43 JustDaniel cushions
will not suffice
when taking Zeus' ad... Jul 7 04, 07:41 Cleo_Serapis To drive
on life's highway,
one must appear forwar... Jul 8 04, 06:18 Zeus˛ Blinkers,
go left or right,
life's choices to ... Jul 8 04, 06:41 JustDaniel smooth ride
by adding shocks
but not the lightning... Jul 8 04, 06:54 Zeus˛ Lightning,
use to persuade,
can't stand the he... Jul 8 04, 18:55 JustDaniel nice sky
suddenly clouds
darkening the noonscape... Jul 10 04, 09:47 Cleo_Serapis In light
I am refreshed
and find my way with joy
a... Jul 11 04, 06:52 Zeus˛ Won, lost
searching always,
looking for pot o... Jul 11 04, 08:28 JustDaniel see it?
...how could we miss...
basking there in... Jul 11 04, 14:43 Zeus˛ Tanning,
looking so good,
pool people envious,
som... Jul 11 04, 18:17 JustDaniel so light
a signal fire
proclaiming tannerness
for ... Jul 11 04, 18:58 Zeus˛ Darkness,
shadows hiding,
night stillness, not a ... Jul 12 04, 11:20 JustDaniel Tex-Mex weather or not
day breaks
with chile-ness... Jul 12 04, 16:07 Zeus˛ Female,
wants to eat out,
fit, trim special diet,
... Jul 12 04, 17:42 JustDaniel heartburn?
lay off the sauce...
both kinds, fer th... Jul 13 04, 00:33 Cleo_Serapis Or chum
with very best:
those who ignite your muse... Jul 13 04, 05:20 JustDaniel oil weighs
more than water
so explain to me please... Jul 13 04, 05:55 Zeus˛
Ya see,
look, it's like this,
viscosity, fo... Jul 13 04, 16:02 JustDaniel nose spill
viscosity
can really bugger up
a fin... Jul 13 04, 17:58 Zeus˛ Choo Choo,
not any more,
heap big diesel engines,
... Jul 13 04, 18:19 JustDaniel whistle
as I blow smoke
to cover up the fact
I hav... Jul 13 04, 19:17 Zeus˛ A bout,
is the art of
conveying remote ideas,
to ... Jul 13 04, 20:02 JustDaniel would think
that some would know
that all it is is... Jul 13 04, 20:28 Zeus˛ Onward,
bigger, better,
the sky is the limit,
on t... Jul 14 04, 06:55 JustDaniel dreaming
there on that throne
makes wide your hori... Jul 15 04, 16:30 Zeus˛ Befits,
full of grandeur,
with finest golden t... Jul 16 04, 14:04 JustDaniel no foe
of this peon
fo/ in this whole wide wo/ld
t... Jul 16 04, 17:29 Zeus˛ My lair,
chock full o' words
use all my discre... Jul 16 04, 22:12 JustDaniel massage
your every word
to lure those stamp-lickin... Jul 16 04, 23:09 WHERE THERE'S A WILL ....
To post
or not to ... Jul 16 04, 23:58 JustDaniel silence
had been golden,
but the noble steed whine... Jul 17 04, 03:55 Zeus˛ Izzy,
just a nickname,
could have been called Wazz... Jul 17 04, 05:27 JustDaniel wizened head
pimple
on end of knows
oozes intelli... Jul 17 04, 13:09 heartsong7 a pinch
of salt is fine
to enhance the flavor;
mor... Jul 17 04, 16:20 Zeus˛
Saver,
money in cans,
or under the mattress,
d... Jul 17 04, 17:23 SPELL INK
Dear Sir,
your spelling's wrong
it... Jul 17 04, 17:26 heartsong7 Magic
waits everywhere,
It's in the sky and tr... Jul 17 04, 17:35 Zeus˛
Looking,
everywhere, for
the person of... Jul 17 04, 20:18 heartsong7 Waiting
won't get it done.
Go out and look for... Jul 17 04, 20:33 JustDaniel refreshing paws
chaise there
is where undress... Jul 18 04, 03:00 Zeus˛ Renewed,
muse expired,
can't write without lic... Jul 18 04, 17:18 heartsong7 Haiku
five seven five
three lines in present tense... Jul 18 04, 17:39 
JustDaniel serene
but seasoned well
with life in a snapshot
c... Jul 18 04, 22:28 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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