 Empyrean Beauty (another change of title), REVISION THREE |
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 Jun 17 09, 17:56
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
QUOTE (ohsteve @ Jun 5 09, 02:08 )  Snow, I love the new title... Very much a keeper, I also love the new revision... it is much crisper, cleaner, yet still very descriptive and mood changing. I don't think that getting anymore informative about telling what the poem is, is really needed... I was really feeling off my feed that day...lol. I'm not sure I would change anything else, but again that is your choice... Take care Steve Hi Steve Thanks for the thumbs up - I have done a bit more tweaking, but not drastically chaged anything. Snow 
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Jun 17 09, 18:17
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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Snow,
Wow! Sounds just wonderful!! I like it just like it is now!!! Peggy ······· ······· |
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Jun 23 09, 15:40
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Mosaic Master Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Peggy Carpenter Harwood @ Jun 18 09, 00:17 ) Hi Snow, Wow! Sounds just wonderful!! I like it just like it is now!!! Peggy Thanks Peggy! Snow
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Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner |
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