QUOTE(jgdittier @ Nov. 06 2005, 19:17)
Dear MaXiM,
"Where Love Lies" is for me a masterful expanded use of this style of poetry.
Usually such rhyme inmoses so much restraint on the message that nothing so serious as yours can even be contemplated. Here you've
managed to incorporate a beautiful message despite the poem's form.
Your ending is also just boffo!
Nicely done!
Cheers, Ron jgd
Hi Ron
I am glad that you found this poem worked in this form. I am looking to try out a few specific forms, as although I (try to) write in rhyme and meter I have not tried too many set forms to date.
Thank you for your kind comments.
MaXiM