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post Sep 16 04, 06:55
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like leaves,
the depths
of my soul,

It was so sudden
did not see it coming
though there were signs,

were so successful
up to that time
we were happy,

then, little things
began to occur
mistakes were made,

argument began
to rear its ugly head
clear minded
we were not,

we knew
the end was near
never to be
the same again,

don’t make amends
can we still be

time will tell
changes to be made
there is always

what do we say
to all,
have faith
we will learn
from our mistakes.

Niners’ 39- Giants’38 (2002)
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post Sep 19 04, 08:49
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Now I remember this one Lar! Idea.gif

Excellent - I'll add your "Red Zone" also!
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post Sep 19 04, 14:29
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Hi there, official spokeman for the NFC! You get telecasts on the mount or do you just hover over the stadium with a gods-eye view?

There's always next year...tell it to the Boston Red Sox or Detroit Lions! Those poor fans...at least the Giants won a Superbowl a few years ago.

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post Sep 26 04, 12:16
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What a treat! I didn't know to the end this was about football.
Well done!


Forgiveness is the fragrance
the violet sheds
on the heel
that has crushed it.

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