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Cleo_Serapis Short Story Exercise 5 Jan 7 05, 06:25
Jox Hi Lori, What distinction are you making here? I... Jan 7 05, 12:50 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Jox @ Jan. 07 2005, 12:50)Hi Lori, Wh... Jan 7 05, 12:54 Jox Lori, Hi. Thanks. Sorry, I've no idea what t... Jan 7 05, 13:46 Toumai Hi Lori and James, When I have heard the phrase ... Jan 7 05, 14:18 Jox Ta, Fran, Yes, that makes sense and is good advic... Jan 7 05, 14:26 Cleo_Serapis Ahhhhhh OK Fran! :sun: :sun: :su... Jan 7 05, 18:03 Charon This is very interesting. I for one abhor di... Jan 7 05, 20:45 Jox Hi Butch, Good point - but when reading others... Jan 7 05, 21:01 Morgan le Fay Hi Lori! My short answer would be, " it's... Jan 8 05, 00:36 Toumai Hello, what an interesting discussion you have her... Jan 8 05, 05:20 Jox Hi Fran, Thank you very much for that. I have rea... Jan 8 05, 05:51 Charon What great conversation. I have looked back upon ... Jan 8 05, 09:19 Cleo_Serapis Hello everyone! YES - this certainly IS a good... Jan 8 05, 10:41 Perrorist Hi, Lori I think the essence of "show don't t... Jan 8 05, 15:18 Jox Butch - that was interesting - thanks very much. ... Jan 8 05, 17:03 Cleo_Serapis Hello Perry. :tigger: Thank you so much fo... Jan 8 05, 17:13 Cailean IMO, Butch/Charon has nailed it. It's overdeta... Jan 8 05, 19:32 Cleo_Serapis Thanks so much Cailean! You have offered to me th... Jan 9 05, 08:21 Charon She walked slowly to the door, half-opened, with l... Jan 9 05, 12:51 Toumai I'll let you know if it was scary once I dare ... Jan 9 05, 13:59 Jox Wow! Butch... it's in the bag! I enjo... Jan 9 05, 14:27 Cleo_Serapis In my own example: As father and daughter walked p... Jan 9 05, 15:23 Jox Hi Lori et al, I think there is such a thing as o... Jan 9 05, 15:29 Perrorist Hi, Lori Your first example was already showing. ... Jan 9 05, 15:38 Cleo_Serapis I tend to get bogged down in details.. Perhaps th... Jan 9 05, 16:08 Perrorist Lori I suppose I should read the story first befo... Jan 9 05, 16:21 Jox Hi Lori, My approach is to say the least I can to... Jan 9 05, 16:39 Perrorist Lori I've read through your story and conclud... Jan 9 05, 22:02 Cleo_Serapis Thanks so very much James and Perry! I am new to ... Jan 10 05, 06:21 Toumai Hi everyone, I think I agree with Perry that show... Jan 10 05, 06:45 Jox Hi all, Actually, that reminds me that, since I h... Jan 10 05, 07:43 Perrorist Lori Fran said "I think I agree with Perry that s... Jan 10 05, 14:18 Perrorist Overwriting is an obvious giveaway of an amateur w... Jan 10 05, 14:43 Charon Ah, I like the conversation regarding King and his... Jan 10 05, 20:14 Perrorist Hi, Charon Cinderella is a good example of tellin... Jan 10 05, 21:37 Cleo_Serapis Let's try another: How would continue to write th... Jan 14 05, 06:26 Perrorist It's a lovely phrase, Lori, but what is it you... Jan 14 05, 15:27 Cailean Reading through here again ... Charon has it pegge... Jan 15 05, 01:02 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Perrorist @ Jan. 14 2005, 15:27)It's a... Jan 15 05, 08:08 Jox Inside the realm of fantasy, her mirrored image sp... Jan 15 05, 08:19 Toumai Hi Lori, I am a little confused here, wondering w... Jan 15 05, 10:26 Cleo_Serapis Hi. No - I just wanted you to use your imaginatio... Jan 17 05, 05:31 Cleo_Serapis Arese waded to a stop in the crystalline waters. M... Jan 19 05, 05:24 Jox Hi Lori - another microstory - and pathos too... Jan 19 05, 12:23 Cleo_Serapis Here's a great article on Show v. Tell... Show,... Feb 5 05, 10:35 Nina Hi Lori I've just been reading through this f... Feb 5 05, 14:00 Toumai Hi Lori, Many thanks for the links - I've rea... Feb 5 05, 14:09 Jox Nina, Fran's idea is great - it's the ide... Feb 5 05, 17:48 Nina Hi Fran and James Thanks for the encouragement. ... Feb 5 05, 18:16 Jox Hi Nina, May I suggest that you take a look here.... Feb 5 05, 18:24 Nina Hi James Thanks for the link. I think I ge... Feb 5 05, 18:50 Jox Thank you Nina. Much appreciated. James. Feb 5 05, 19:21 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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