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sweet reverie.
still, you know every little boy when he sees a white suit---wants to throw a little mud.
too sweet?
no, just too familiar. i wanted either a killer image or a surprise making this a touch more modern---
'"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all/Ye know on earth, and all ye need ...
Keats...etc...
the iconic statement, yes?
updated here:
Brautigan ----"Polish It like a Piece of Silver,"
collected in ... "Propelled by Portals Whose Only Shame";
and ....."All Girls Should Have a Poem" ...
beauty in a modern cast, yes?
Ars Poetica by Archibald MacLeish
A poem should be palpable and mute As a globed fruit,
Dumb As old medallions to the thumb,
Silent as the sleeve-worn stone Of casement ledges where the moss has grown—
A poem should be wordless As the flight of birds.
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A poem should be motionless in time As the moon climbs,
Leaving, as the moon releases Twig by twig the night-entangled trees,
Leaving, as the moon behind the winter leaves, Memory by memory the mind—
A poem should be motionless in time As the moon climbs.
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A poem should be equal to: Not true.
For all the history of grief An empty doorway and a maple leaf.
For love The leaning grasses and two lights above the sea—
A poem should not mean But be.
Archibald MacLeish---three Pulitzer prizes.
so a good poem, could the addition of a killer image make this more striking and unforgetable?
mojave
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