QUOTE (ohsteve @ Feb 18 10, 03:20 )
Konstantin, I like acrostics, but why call it Winter, when it is all about SNOW?
When snow turns blue you know
it is cold. Knife edge of wind
nips in through layers of clothes.
Tracks of wood land animals and birds
evoke their own stories around the holes where
running water begs not to be frozen with the rest of the world.
Suddenly the world has donned a white winter coat,
now there isn't any color to save the eyes.
Owls have changed their feather and chase after rabbits
with white fur and mice that have gone that way too.
You have done very well for english being a second laugage, I can only say a smattering of words in other laungages. Never mind write poetry in them. I think you might be trying to hard to make them rhyme also, try doing it in free verse.
Steve
Stephen, thank you for your warm words.
Yes, all these acrostics are 'snow' ones, and in all these 5 acrostics you can see this word not only if you look at the 1st letters of the lines, but I've written more than 30 'snow' acrostics and some of them haven't got this word in the text. And as all of them are about winter, I decided to call them "Winter".
You see, I don't like puzzles or crosswords, but rhyming (especially writing iverhymes-iverhycks) is my hobby.
Thank you again.
Konstantin.
P.S. By the way, where did you see mice that put on white fur in winter? Perhaps you thought of ermines?