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Eisa
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This is extrememly well crafted and hard to believe it's Lori's first quantrain refrain.

This posted in Herme's Homilies: Shadow's Lands


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Shadow's Lands
First Revision: TY John, Eric and Liz!

She slinks along through Shadow’s lands,
aware of mortals’ mighty claw
where skilled disciples deal their hands
of destiny; she’ll not withdraw.

Tall torches raze a tepid night,
emblazoned mark of high command
consumes the chaos they invite;
she slinks along through Shadow’s lands.

A camouflage of earthen tones
incites a Vulture’s lynching law.
They eat raw flesh; discard the bones
aware of mortals’ mighty claw.

Adjudication comes to pass
unlike combatants; she withstands
content to bathe in fodder’s grass…
where skilled disciples deal their hands.

Her world is changed, no more the prey
as kindred Shadows rise in awe
to venerate her life’s bouquet
of destiny; she’ll not withdraw.


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- Eisa   March 2007 IBPC Nominations   Mar 3 07, 17:25
- - AMETHYST   Hey Snow ... Excellent choice- I will put in a S...   Mar 3 07, 20:19
- - azurepoetry   i know this isn't a crit area, but oh man, i l...   Mar 4 07, 00:43
- - Cleo_Serapis   Wow! This is a nice eye opener this morning! T...   Mar 4 07, 09:48
- - AMETHYST   Ah Tim, no part take could possibly be sloppy comi...   Mar 4 07, 18:17
- - Eisa   I'd like to nominate Horsetales by Merlin, fou...   Mar 7 07, 04:47
- - Cleo_Serapis   Oh, this looks neat! I haven't had a chance to rea...   Mar 7 07, 06:22
- - AMETHYST   Great Nomination! There is well chiselled skill w...   Mar 7 07, 08:52
- - AMETHYST   Hey Just wondering has this been given permission ...   Mar 7 07, 08:58
- - Cleo_Serapis   Permission granted and thanks again!   Mar 7 07, 12:45
- - AMETHYST   Ah you silly - I saw you did! LOL Congrats, this h...   Mar 7 07, 16:15
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem for its excelle...   Mar 12 07, 10:14
- - AMETHYST   I would enjoy nominating this poem by Snow. The po...   Mar 12 07, 11:35
- - Cleo_Serapis   I'd like to nominate Daniah's poem "Words" located...   Mar 13 07, 18:30
- - Cleo_Serapis   You are most welcome Daniah!   Mar 13 07, 19:05
- - Eisa   I second this with applause! Snow   Mar 13 07, 19:36
- - Siren   Eira, Thanks so much for the applause honey. hu...   Mar 14 07, 08:53
- - AMETHYST   Hey Dani, This is well deserving to be nominated...   Mar 14 07, 22:43
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem by Jaxmyth, loc...   Mar 14 07, 23:05
- - Eisa   I second this -- a well written poem. Snow   Mar 15 07, 05:13
- - Siren   Wonderfully well written.. Good luck ! Dani   Mar 15 07, 08:21
- - Peterpan   Well Done a nomination already! Excellent exe...   Mar 15 07, 09:32
- - Eisa   The Quatrain Refrain is no easy form to write and ...   Mar 15 07, 19:07
- - AMETHYST   THank you Snow! You've made my day! Thank you ... ...   Mar 15 07, 21:31
- - AMETHYST   I would like to nominate this poem for the depth i...   Mar 16 07, 11:02
- - Siren   Hey Liz, Thanks sweetie for thirding it. Hugs D...   Mar 16 07, 17:33
- - Siren   Hey Daniel, Good luck my dear! Dani   Mar 16 07, 17:38
- - Siren   A wonderful nomination Liz, well deserving. Hugs...   Mar 16 07, 17:42
- - AMETHYST   Hi Daniah, Thank you so much! There is stil some...   Mar 19 07, 08:25
- - AMETHYST   Permission Granted, Thanks Daniel! Good luck in th...   Mar 19 07, 18:27
- - Cleo_Serapis   Per Daniel's email request today, I have removed '...   Mar 23 07, 11:39
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Liz on being selected for the April IBPC ...   Mar 29 07, 05:23
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Jan on being selected for the April IBPC ...   Mar 29 07, 05:24
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thank you very much to those who've voted for this...   Mar 29 07, 05:25
- - AMETHYST   Congratulations Lori ... Good luck representing MM...   Mar 29 07, 07:16
- - AMETHYST   Yes Congratulations Jan ... This is an absolute gu...   Mar 29 07, 07:18
- - AMETHYST   Thank you everyone who voted and Thank you Lori fo...   Mar 29 07, 07:23
- - Peterpan   Yes, Lori ~ This took my vote. GOOD LUCK! :sh...   Mar 29 07, 10:30
- - Peterpan   This is an amazing poem, I have told you before Li...   Mar 29 07, 10:32
- - AMETHYST   Thank you Bev, I am most appreciating of all the...   Mar 29 07, 16:48
- - Cleo_Serapis   Liz and Bev very much!   Mar 29 07, 17:19
- - Eisa   Hi Lori Applause ... and good luck! Snow   Mar 30 07, 17:06
- - Eisa   Hi Liz Applause ... and best luck Snow   Mar 30 07, 17:08
- - Eisa   Hi Jax Applause ...and good luck Snow   Mar 30 07, 17:11
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hey Liz - one itsy nit: when strength and courage ...   Mar 31 07, 06:36
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks very much Snow!   Mar 31 07, 07:07
- - JaxMyth   Many thanks to you all. I am sorry for the tardin...   Apr 4 07, 19:58
- - Psyche   Congratulations on the nom! I like this poem v...   Apr 5 07, 10:46

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