Hi Jan! :grinning:
I must say, I was drawn into your piece here!
While this is not haiku (if you follow the form, it must be a 5/7/5 syllable tercet), it IS striking!
I find several metaphors and meaning in this piece. If you'd like to make these into haiku, I'd be happy to help as I'm sure others would as well here in 'Karnak Crossing's" Haiku tile.
In any event, this is a brilliant piece - again, the metaphor of 'drowining in liquer' is evident to me.
Cheers! ~Cleo :pharoah2
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