Group: Gold Member
Posts: 250
Joined: 1-November 15
Member No.: 5,282
Real Name: richard chase
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Rhapsody
Early Release
Showing only a slight fraction of the vengeance that enveloped her, she had turned sixteen in the harsh environment where glum was the word and the deed.
Suddenly, her horizon turned teal blue/green.
A seminal berry in the corner of her mind relayed the notion to her, excited her
to buy a new supply of black lipstick and to hastily get into the wind.
Group: Gold Member
Posts: 18,700
Joined: 2-August 03
From: Southwest New Jersey, USA
Member No.: 6
Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
I hope this is about HER early release and not his.
Group: Administrator
Posts: 18,892
Joined: 1-August 03
From: Massachusetts
Member No.: 2
Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Imhotep
What an interesting response!
I take it this is a young 'rebel' with a cause as MC?
Nice use of the ten words!
Cleo
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