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> The Valentine Delivery., MM's 10 word challenge for Feb 7th, 2017
post Feb 15 17, 19:05
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Real Name: Denis Barter
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For one sixteen, life had been harsh
and she doubted anything could excite her,
though having a notion, nothing would improve
she’d prayed for a wind of change.
On opening the envelope a fraction:
and recognising the teal coloured ink,
she blushed the deepest berry pink!
Glum no more, her immediate reaction
was to immediately spring into action,
and kissed the mailman on his cheek!

Rhymer February 15th, 2017.
Words used in order: sixteen, harsh, excite,
notion, wind, envelope, fraction, teal, berry, glum.
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post Feb 16 17, 00:24
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Very cute indeed, Denis! Love it!

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post Feb 18 17, 16:11
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Brings back memories! Did I just admit that? magictongue.png

Enjoyed the read Denis!
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