Greetings, friend:
Just some punctuation and a couple of questions
You know I don't do free verse, but since things have been so quiet, I'm visiting the other side:
QUOTE (greenwich @ Apr 2 17, 18:04 )
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Sometimes here(,) seems far away(,);
when you're in the lounge(,)
early morning seems to orchestrate
yet prevaricates,
the possibility of personal change. (I don't understand the connection here ?)
Wish this could last(,)
longer than a radio show;
caught in this rare-field (what IS rarefield??)
where there is no movement beyond
these summoned thoughts
in Light of quiet, Daniel