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Dec 29 03, 20:44
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Hi all!
Let's start our first interactive class with an abbreviated definition of poetry characteristics:
Poetry communicates and conveys feelings in a concentrated form. It uses language to create sound effects and word pictures, to set up associations in the reader’s mind, and to make striking comparisons through figures of speech.
Jox's take: Poetry conveys emotions and ideas in a concentrated form. It employs language creatively, both as imagery and for its tonal qualities. It is the purest form of writing.
In our first class, we will read a few lines from a famous poem.
The exercise is twofold:- First, write down your first image and emotional reaction.
- Second, write a few lines with your own feeling and figure of speech to match the lines of the famous poem.
From the works of Alice Meynell, "Builders of Ruins", first stanza:
We build with strength and deep tower wall that shall be shattered thus and thus. And fair and great are court and hall, but how fair--this is not for us, who know the lack that lurks in all.
To view entire poem, click here.
Things to keep in mind:- Is there a set metered pattern (of stressed and unstressed syllables)?
- Is there a set rhyming pattern (repetition of similar sounds)?
- Is there a set rhythmic pattern (the sense of movement attributable to the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables)?
Let's start now. Please ADD REPLY to this tile. GOOD LUCK!
~Cleo
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Cleo_Serapis Poetry Exercise #1 (updated Jan 4) Dec 29 03, 20:44 Jox Hi Cleo,
Good luck with this new idea.
We build ... Dec 30 03, 05:19 Cleo_Serapis What an excellent commentary James! This is wonder... Dec 30 03, 06:07 Jox Cleo...
Thank you very much. Think you ought to ... Dec 30 03, 11:50 Don QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Dec. 29 2003, 19:44)Hi ... Dec 30 03, 11:52 Don Hey Cleo,
How about
A word is packed with pixels... Dec 30 03, 12:15 JustDaniel Well...
after reading all the great and insightfu... Dec 31 03, 05:11 Jox Hi Daniel,
I've read many of your works; you... Dec 31 03, 07:08 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Jox @ Dec. 30 2003, 11:50)Cleo...
We... Dec 31 03, 08:20 Cleo_Serapis
Hi Don!
You get a gold star for the day! :... Dec 31 03, 08:34 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ Dec. 30 2003, 12:15)Hey Cleo,
H... Dec 31 03, 08:47 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Dec. 31 2003, 05:11)Well... Dec 31 03, 08:55 Don A glorious goodbye to December.
Hi Lori,
Having ... Dec 31 03, 17:28 Don QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Dec. 31 2003, 04:11)Well... Dec 31 03, 17:55 Cleo_Serapis Did Don mention 'slot machine'? Ohh la la!
I'll b... Jan 1 04, 15:27 JustDaniel Thank you all for your kind words and encouragemen... Jan 1 04, 15:52 Jox Hi Don,
I've been reading your reply to Danie... Jan 2 04, 18:46 Don QUOTE (Jox @ Jan. 02 2004, 17:46)Hi Don,
I... Jan 3 04, 13:14 JustDaniel surface meanings trope
this bumpkin would-be poet
... Jan 3 04, 16:10 Jox Hi Don,
Thank you for your reply.
Sacred temple?... Jan 3 04, 17:47 JustDaniel dry seriousness
clear the evidence;
wipe away de... Jan 3 04, 19:18 Athena If I had more wit
I'd do more than just sit
sa... Jan 4 04, 01:38 Jox Hello Dolly
(Been wanting to say that all year... Jan 4 04, 05:02 Athena Hey James,
Thank you so much for your kind and pa... Jan 4 04, 05:12 Jox Thanks Dolly...
But you really DO NOT want to hea... Jan 4 04, 06:21 JustDaniel Excellent summary, James...
except for glossing o... Jan 4 04, 07:01 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 01 2004, 15:52)Than... Jan 4 04, 09:09 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ Dec. 31 2003, 17:55)All too ofte... Jan 4 04, 09:17 Cleo_Serapis To continue with this exercise, I am going to past... Jan 4 04, 09:25 Don QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 04 2004, 06:01)Exce... Jan 4 04, 09:38 Jox Daniel,
Hi; I don't think that I glossed-over... Jan 4 04, 09:46 Jox Builders of Ruins by Alice Meynell >> The title is... Jan 4 04, 10:13 Don QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 04 2004, 08:17)QUO... Jan 4 04, 10:29 Cleo_Serapis It is my honor and pleasure Don! :) Jan 4 04, 10:39 Don QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 04 2004, 08:25) To... Jan 4 04, 10:59 Don Hi Jox,
Enjoyed your comments upon additional ver... Jan 4 04, 11:19 Don QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 04 2004, 00:38) If I had... Jan 4 04, 12:04 Don QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 03 2004, 18:18)dry ... Jan 4 04, 12:16 Don Dear Jox,
Who would have predicted how lively thi... Jan 4 04, 13:19 Cleo_Serapis After reading the additional stanzas, my interpret... Jan 4 04, 18:20 JustDaniel QUOTE (Don @ Jan. 04 2004, 11:16)QUOTE (Just ... Jan 5 04, 06:53 Don QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 05 2004, 05:53)QUOT... Jan 5 04, 08:53 Cleo_Serapis Hehehh, any suggestions for the next poetry exerci... Jan 5 04, 18:28 Don QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 05 2004, 17:28)Heh... Jan 5 04, 19:14 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ Jan. 05 2004, 08:53)I looked int... Jan 6 04, 06:22 JustDaniel A note to Don:
I'm heartened by your reply, m... Jan 6 04, 06:27 Dear Cleo
We build with strength and deep tower w... Jan 6 04, 07:51 Don QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 06 2004, 05:22)QUO... Jan 6 04, 08:05 Jox Alan,
My very dear fellow how absolutely spiffing... Jan 6 04, 08:35 Cleo_Serapis Nwext part of exercise -
Please re-write the last... Jan 6 04, 17:47 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 06 2004, 08:51)Dear Cleo
... Jan 6 04, 17:50 Dear Jox & Cleo
Thank you for the welcomes !
... Jan 6 04, 18:38 Jox And make our pause and silence brim
with the shril... Jan 6 04, 18:42 Jox Alan, Hi.
Yes, I am completely out of kilter with... Jan 6 04, 18:57 Dear Jox
"if romance be the food of dreams then r... Jan 6 04, 19:08 Athena Welcome back, Alan!
As for these exercis... Jan 6 04, 22:52 Dear Daniel
Well, if that doesn't bring it sl... Jan 7 04, 02:21 Athena Hi Don,
I wanted to get in here to give you thank... Jan 7 04, 02:45 Cleo_Serapis We build with strength and deep tower wall
that sh... Jan 9 04, 17:51
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