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Cleo_Serapis
post Dec 29 03, 20:44
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Hi all!  cali.gif

Let's start our first interactive class with an abbreviated definition of poetry characteristics:

Poetry communicates and conveys feelings in a concentrated form. It uses language to create sound effects and word pictures, to set up associations in the reader’s mind, and to make striking comparisons through figures of speech.

Jox's take: Poetry conveys emotions and ideas in a concentrated form. It employs language creatively, both as imagery and for its tonal qualities. It is the purest form of writing.



In our first class, we will read a few lines from a famous poem.

The exercise is twofold:
  • First, write down your first image and emotional reaction.
  • Second, write a few lines with your own feeling and figure of speech to match the lines of the famous poem.
From the works of Alice Meynell, "Builders of Ruins", first stanza:

We build with strength and deep tower wall
that shall be shattered thus and thus.
And fair and great are court and hall,
but how fair--this is not for us,
who know the lack that lurks in all.


To view entire poem, click here.

Things to keep in mind:
  • Is there a set metered pattern (of stressed and unstressed syllables)?
  • Is there a set rhyming pattern (repetition of similar sounds)?
  • Is there a set rhythmic pattern (the sense of movement attributable to the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables)?
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GOOD LUCK!

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- Cleo_Serapis   Poetry Exercise #1 (updated Jan 4)   Dec 29 03, 20:44
- - Jox   Hi Cleo, Good luck with this new idea. We build ...   Dec 30 03, 05:19
- - Cleo_Serapis   What an excellent commentary James! This is wonder...   Dec 30 03, 06:07
- - Jox   Cleo... Thank you very much. Think you ought to ...   Dec 30 03, 11:50
- - Don   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Dec. 29 2003, 19:44)Hi ...   Dec 30 03, 11:52
- - Don   Hey Cleo, How about A word is packed with pixels...   Dec 30 03, 12:15
- - JustDaniel   Well... after reading all the great and insightfu...   Dec 31 03, 05:11
- - Jox   Hi Daniel, I've read many of your works; you...   Dec 31 03, 07:08
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Jox @ Dec. 30 2003, 11:50)Cleo... We...   Dec 31 03, 08:20
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Don! You get a gold star for the day!  :...   Dec 31 03, 08:34
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Don @ Dec. 30 2003, 12:15)Hey Cleo, H...   Dec 31 03, 08:47
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Dec. 31 2003, 05:11)Well...   Dec 31 03, 08:55
- - Don   A glorious goodbye to December. Hi Lori, Having ...   Dec 31 03, 17:28
- - Don   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Dec. 31 2003, 04:11)Well...   Dec 31 03, 17:55
- - Cleo_Serapis   Did Don mention 'slot machine'? Ohh la la! I'll b...   Jan 1 04, 15:27
- - JustDaniel   Thank you all for your kind words and encouragemen...   Jan 1 04, 15:52
- - Jox   Hi Don, I've been reading your reply to Danie...   Jan 2 04, 18:46
- - Don   QUOTE (Jox @ Jan. 02 2004, 17:46)Hi Don, I...   Jan 3 04, 13:14
- - JustDaniel   surface meanings trope this bumpkin would-be poet ...   Jan 3 04, 16:10
- - Jox   Hi Don, Thank you for your reply. Sacred temple?...   Jan 3 04, 17:47
- - JustDaniel   dry seriousness clear the evidence; wipe away de...   Jan 3 04, 19:18
- - Athena   If I had more wit I'd do more than just sit sa...   Jan 4 04, 01:38
- - Jox   Hello Dolly (Been wanting to say that all year...   Jan 4 04, 05:02
- - Athena   Hey James, Thank you so much for your kind and pa...   Jan 4 04, 05:12
- - Jox   Thanks Dolly... But you really DO NOT want to hea...   Jan 4 04, 06:21
- - JustDaniel   Excellent summary, James... except for glossing o...   Jan 4 04, 07:01
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 01 2004, 15:52)Than...   Jan 4 04, 09:09
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Don @ Dec. 31 2003, 17:55)All too ofte...   Jan 4 04, 09:17
- - Cleo_Serapis   To continue with this exercise, I am going to past...   Jan 4 04, 09:25
- - Don   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 04 2004, 06:01)Exce...   Jan 4 04, 09:38
- - Jox   Daniel, Hi; I don't think that I glossed-over...   Jan 4 04, 09:46
- - Jox   Builders of Ruins by Alice Meynell >> The title is...   Jan 4 04, 10:13
- - Don   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 04 2004, 08:17)QUO...   Jan 4 04, 10:29
- - Cleo_Serapis   It is my honor and pleasure Don! :)   Jan 4 04, 10:39
- - Don   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 04 2004, 08:25) To...   Jan 4 04, 10:59
- - Don   Hi Jox, Enjoyed your comments upon additional ver...   Jan 4 04, 11:19
- - Don   QUOTE (Athena @ Jan. 04 2004, 00:38) If I had...   Jan 4 04, 12:04
- - Don   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 03 2004, 18:18)dry ...   Jan 4 04, 12:16
- - Don   Dear Jox, Who would have predicted how lively thi...   Jan 4 04, 13:19
- - Cleo_Serapis   After reading the additional stanzas, my interpret...   Jan 4 04, 18:20
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Don @ Jan. 04 2004, 11:16)QUOTE (Just ...   Jan 5 04, 06:53
- - Don   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Jan. 05 2004, 05:53)QUOT...   Jan 5 04, 08:53
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hehehh, any suggestions for the next poetry exerci...   Jan 5 04, 18:28
- - Don   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 05 2004, 17:28)Heh...   Jan 5 04, 19:14
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Don @ Jan. 05 2004, 08:53)I looked int...   Jan 6 04, 06:22
- - JustDaniel   A note to Don: I'm heartened by your reply, m...   Jan 6 04, 06:27
- -   Dear Cleo We build with strength and deep tower w...   Jan 6 04, 07:51
- - Don   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 06 2004, 05:22)QUO...   Jan 6 04, 08:05
- - Jox   Alan, My very dear fellow how absolutely spiffing...   Jan 6 04, 08:35
- - Cleo_Serapis   Nwext part of exercise - Please re-write the last...   Jan 6 04, 17:47
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 06 2004, 08:51)Dear Cleo ...   Jan 6 04, 17:50
- -   Dear Jox & Cleo Thank you for the welcomes ! ...   Jan 6 04, 18:38
- - Jox   And make our pause and silence brim with the shril...   Jan 6 04, 18:42
- - Jox   Alan, Hi. Yes, I am completely out of kilter with...   Jan 6 04, 18:57
- -   Dear Jox "if romance be the food of dreams then r...   Jan 6 04, 19:08
- - Athena   Welcome back, Alan!     As for these exercis...   Jan 6 04, 22:52
- -   Dear Daniel Well, if that doesn't bring it sl...   Jan 7 04, 02:21
- - Athena   Hi Don, I wanted to get in here to give you thank...   Jan 7 04, 02:45
- - Cleo_Serapis   We build with strength and deep tower wall that sh...   Jan 9 04, 17:51

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