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Feb 1 04, 20:11
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Hi Folks~
Following Dolly's lead here and after reading and interacting with you all in the Haiku and Tetractys Train threads, I've decided to start a SEPARATE thread for an Interactive Cinquain Train.
A Cinquain Train!
Same rules (to quote Dolly):
I'll write a cinquain, and then the next person begins theirs with the last line of mine, the next person begins theirs with the last line on that one, etc. They do NOT have to be on the same subject, but they CAN be if you wish. It's all up to YOU! Whattaya think? Shall we give it a go?
How about attempting to write one a day for 15 or 30 days in a row? Anyone game to commit to this endeavor?
I'll begin this thread:
Angels; behest His love. Seldom seen, always felt, everlasting serenity. Guide us.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Feb 1 04, 20:32
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Dear Cleo
I'm game, see below :
THE XXXVIIITH PSALM
Guide us, walkie-talk man, right into the end zone more times than the opposition, we pray !
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 1 04, 20:51
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Mosaic Master
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Clever!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Feb 2 04, 00:47
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Thank you, Lori! Yes, I really like interactive poetry and I sure like yours!Here's mine, beginning with Alan's last two words:
We pray for all we want and hope for all the rest. Don't have to agree with what's best for us.
© D R Harris
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Feb 2 04, 05:45
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CON-FESS
For us to survive well, there must be honesty; so I con-fess I've never lied, in truth .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 2 04, 09:45
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It’s true; I saw it
in truth we all must lie if we would sleep at night; alas, I make it hard for her… I snore
© Daniel J Ricketts 02 Feb 2004
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Feb 2 04, 10:17
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I MARRIED EWE
I snore, she says; she lies; and she lies "wide awake" counting the sheep she's married to; in dreams .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 2 04, 12:39
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In dreams I watch you sleep, brush hair off your temple, curl my finger around it and sigh.
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Feb 2 04, 16:47
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SACRIFICIAL
and sigh, and weep, and die, ye sacrificed women, whose lands have become the playground of war .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 3 04, 14:49
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of war-- when time as drums incessantly sounding remind us of mortality in death
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Feb 4 04, 08:07
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in death
I see the end
of struggles here below;
new life with Him Who rose again
awaits© Daniel J Ricketts 04 Feb 2004
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Feb 4 04, 16:48
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Awaits without us still we yet have work to do do not rush the going patience
© D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work
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Feb 4 04, 20:45
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PROLE PRODS PRONE
Patients are those who wait lying supine and prone to prodding doctors with little patience .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 4 04, 22:15
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Waiting
Patience is what we seek endeavoring each day we strive harder becoming strong we hope
© D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work.
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Feb 4 04, 23:20
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Visa Versa
wee hope
for pro-State men
and those in-continent
who yearn to go restrictedly
abroad
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Feb 4 04, 23:33
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Safety First!
Abroad just to be safe maybe wear diapers. In-continent wise to be dry make plans
© D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work.
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Feb 5 04, 02:55
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WATER WORLD
Make plans, if going away, to be flushed with success if intending to take, or make, water .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 5 04, 06:54
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home cultivation
water tender violet whisper her name gently ‘til she unfolds inside herself delight
© Daniel J Ricketts 06 Feb 2004
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Feb 7 04, 21:18
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Hearing The Voice
de light shines upon us when we humble ourselves to receive it ... the Father knows the time
© D R Harris - 7 February 2004
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Feb 8 04, 06:22
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All spies
the thyme each seasoning all sounds in our eras our run home from the big inning …He nose
© Daniel J Ricketts 08 Fab 2004
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