Cute piece, expressing the frustration of coming up with significant words and lines to share some of our thoughts or impressions as we go through life as poets... sometimes without the right words.
I'm sure that everyone here can identify with this, even if they're not looking for rhyme or meter!
Now, since you asked for a line or two, I'm gonna see if I can earn that 50 cents. I have Pay Pal.
QUOTE (4rum @ Aug 28 07, 03:46 )
In Desperation
I chased a rhyme around the room
I could not seem to catch it
A word might come to lift my gloom
Then none would come to match it
On tip of my protruding tongue
A phrase would briefly teeter
Then totter to the trash unsung
For lack of proper meter
I knit my brow and scratched my head
But that just made things worser
All squinty[-]eyed with bloody and bleeding head
I still could write no verse
my writing got perverser
So I would ask that one of you
If lady, gent or scholar
Would part with just a line or two
I’d pay you half a dollar!
I've offered you a single line.
(We're not here as critiquers)If I don't get four bits, it's fine;
I'm off to find my sneakers.
skatin' through Lightly, Daniel
P.S. Here are another couple lines:
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Just fill them in!