Yes sad for the mockingbird..perhaps...just a thought I had. Thank you for my filling my empty box...it is greatly appreciated...can't add the "a" then my count would be off. I almost never write any kind of formed verse. I suck at it. Drive myself crazy with counts and meter, and stresses....makes me insane...For some reason though I like cinquains...so I try on occassion....
thank you for the read and the reply box deposit. I will return the favor.
QUOTE (Terocon101 @ Jun 15 07, 19:21 )
sang (a)mockingbird Maybe insert "a"
I long for my own song
not one borrowed from another
Its kinda sad this one isn't it? No real crit for you here, but I hate seeing an empty reply box and its the second time I've read it, so I felt I should say something.