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post Oct 12 04, 19:38
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How funny Jim! Have you seen that movie, "Better off Dead"? There's a cute hamburger guy John Cusack's character imagines a talking claymation hamburger singing to that VanHalen tune 'Everybody wants one'?

I want one too! laugh.gif

Cute! Now - how shall I go about ordering your Write On magazette?

~Cleo laugh.gif


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On the counter 2 more soggy hamburger buns,
and both of them are reciting puns.
Talking hamburger buns, I've seen everything,
next thing you know they'll be starting to sing.

This time I was expecting to see a cowboy hat,
but I guess them soggy buns ain't ready for that.
They say I have no choice in the decision they make,
ignorant hamburger buns, that takes the cake.

I take them out into the sunlight to dry,
they both glared out me like I could die.
Reincarnation, we'll decide to be what we want,
and for right now, that's going to be a croissant.......


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post Nov 28 04, 17:38
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Dear Jim,
What a tremendous closing heroic couplet!
Cheers,     jgd


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