Group: Praetorian
Posts: 4,599
Joined: 4-August 03
From: Birmingham, England
Member No.: 12
Real Name: Eira Needham
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
Hi Sergio
I enjoyed the read - the only observation I can make is the three times 'of' is repeated in St1.
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