Hi Daniel - so glad Sue just commented as I saw this is 'view new posts' and have very similar thoughts about this poem.
First - it is good to read your poetry again! Welcome back!
Now - my concern is here and I feel its because I do not quite understand the use of the word 'bent'.
I'd say I love you presently, that all
the fallen years we bent to share have brought
us symmetry.
I am thinking you mean it as if the couple 'endured' and as such shared a symmetry. Please do let me know if I'm on the right track and I'll be back again soon!
Love the ending...
~Cleo