Hi James
I enjoyed this one - you have some lovely descriptions here.
I feel that sentence structure could be improved. Suggestions to follow and perhaps some trimming:
L 1&2 don't make a complete sentence, therefore a capital for hastily is not necessary.[And as] The clouds scattered
hastily hurried
to their heavenly corners
among the realm
of a pastel-pink horizon,
[W]where we dwelled
so often
and spoke without words.
(full stop)And yet
our hearts understood
beyond reason
and earthly wisdom,
[K]
knowing
that this, was meant to be
[How could it not?]
I personally fee the last line is not needed as you have shown this question in your poem.
I love 'pastel pink corners' I hope something I've suggested might help in some way
Snow