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 Revision 3 28/05/07 stolen kisses -- under pink blossoms limbs entwine ******************************* I've decided to go with this for a revision -- but not sure all the same! kisses -- limbs unfold as white blossoms **************** Here's an oldie from Herme's kisses stolen under cherry tree – love blossoms ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
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Eisa kisses stolen -- revision 2 May 26 07, 18:54 
laryalee Hi Snow,
what a lovely moment!
Such a pretty i... May 26 07, 22:51 
Eisa QUOTE (laryalee @ May 27 07, 04:51 ) Hi S... May 27 07, 18:00 Cleo_Serapis Hi SNow.
I also think that switching the words ar... May 27 07, 07:07 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ May 27 07, 13:07 ) ... May 27 07, 18:04 Cleo_Serapis That's very pretty too Snow!
Glad you li... May 27 07, 18:56 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ May 28 07, 00:56 ) ... May 27 07, 19:08 laryalee I'll just toss one more thought in...
for me, ... May 27 07, 21:54 Eisa QUOTE (laryalee @ May 28 07, 03:54 ) I... May 28 07, 04:47 Kathy kisses stolen
under the cherry tree
love blossoms... May 28 07, 00:22 Eisa QUOTE (Kathy @ May 28 07, 06:22 ) kisses ... May 28 07, 04:52 Eisa How about a change ~
kisses –
limbs unfold as
whi... May 28 07, 04:55 Cleo_Serapis Tee hee Snow.
My mind is in the gutter with ... May 28 07, 10:10 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ May 28 07, 16:10 ) ... May 28 07, 19:01 Kathy kisses
limbs unfold as
white blossoms
Hahahahah... May 28 07, 17:28 Eisa QUOTE (Kathy @ May 28 07, 23:28 ) kisses ... May 28 07, 19:15 Cathy Hi Snow,
I'm not good at Haiku's at all b... May 28 07, 17:37 Eisa QUOTE (Cathy @ May 28 07, 23:37 ) Hi Snow... May 28 07, 19:25 laryalee kisses --
under pink blossoms
limbs entwine
Snow... May 28 07, 23:30 Eisa QUOTE (laryalee @ May 29 07, 05:30 ) kiss... May 29 07, 04:39 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow.
THIS is it!
However, one teensy n... May 29 07, 05:19 Eisa Thanks Lori -- I have been wondering about 'st... May 29 07, 06:38 Judi Hmmmmmmmmmmm... Here again...I was taught (and I ... May 29 07, 16:26 Cleo_Serapis Hi Judi.
Yes, the 5/7/5 is the traditional japane... May 29 07, 17:30 Kathy Judi, Cleo's right. haiku is NOT about a syll... May 30 07, 06:17 Kathy stolen kisses --
under pink blossoms
limbs entwin... May 30 07, 06:29 Kathy Taken from here: http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.ht... May 30 07, 06:40 Eisa Kathy -- brilliant information you've given he... May 30 07, 07:45 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Snow on your wizard award winning tile... Nov 4 07, 10:42 Eisa Thanks Lori - it shows how long it's been sinc... Jan 5 08, 11:35 Cleo_Serapis No worries, Snow. I can relate, the time I have be... Jan 6 08, 19:18 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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