Candy Clouds (tweaked Feb 20), Wizard Award ~ sonnet for children |
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Eisa Candy Clouds (tweaked Feb 20) Jan 16 07, 20:12
JustDaniel Love it, Snow... Just a few quickies, as I'm ... Jan 16 07, 22:00 Eisa QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jan 17 07, 03:00 ) 90... Jan 17 07, 05:56 Cathy Hi Snow, Wow! I love the imagery you've ... Jan 17 07, 06:45 Eisa QUOTE (Cathy @ Jan 17 07, 11:45 ) 90100Hi... Jan 19 07, 05:05 JustDaniel Hello, Snow! Let me start with a bit o' w... Jan 17 07, 08:01 Eisa Hi Daniel Thanks for calling back QUOTE (Just... Jan 19 07, 05:10 JLY Snow, You have a lot of fanciful images here. ... Jan 18 07, 12:40 Eisa QUOTE (JLY @ Jan 18 07, 17:40 ) 90146Snow... Jan 19 07, 05:15 Cathy QUOTE Thanks Cathy -- your suggestion is just righ... Jan 19 07, 12:43 Eisa QUOTE (Cathy @ Jan 19 07, 17:43 ) 90192QU... Jan 23 07, 20:05 AMETHYST Hi Snow, I remember this and now with the slight... Jan 24 07, 09:46 Eisa Hi Liz -- I remember you commenting on this elsewh... Jan 25 07, 04:38 AMETHYST Hi Snow... Yes that is what I meant by my sugges... Jan 25 07, 18:54 jgdittier QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Jan 25 07, 23:54 ) 9047... Jan 27 07, 14:18 Eisa QUOTE (jgdittier @ Jan 27 07, 19:18 ) 905... Jan 27 07, 16:29 Eisa QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Jan 25 07, 23:54 ) 9047... Jan 27 07, 16:24 wordsart Hi again This is a lively poem and replete with ... Feb 4 07, 22:16 Eisa Hi Jenni Thanks for your indepth thoughts here. I... Feb 7 07, 18:37 Cleo_Serapis I LOVE this Snow! I have no nits at all - I hope... Feb 10 07, 16:37 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Feb 10 07, 21:37 ) ... Feb 14 07, 17:40 AMETHYST Hey Snow, I just did another read-through on thi... Feb 15 07, 21:44 Eisa QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Feb 16 07, 02:44 ) 9149... Feb 16 07, 04:18 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow. "A spooky shoal of phantom haddock float... Feb 17 07, 10:14 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Feb 17 07, 15:14 ) ... Feb 19 07, 17:48 Don I think revision of your first line is a positive ... Feb 17 07, 14:31 Alan Dear Snow, While I think it an excellent poem, wh... Feb 18 07, 05:05 Eisa QUOTE (Alan @ Feb 18 07, 10:05 ) 91562Dea... Feb 19 07, 17:56 Don I do agree with Alan regarding esetoric words. I b... Feb 18 07, 10:01 Eisa QUOTE (Don @ Feb 18 07, 15:01 ) 91565I do... Feb 19 07, 18:02 Don We agree that vocabulary should be expanded. If... Feb 19 07, 19:37 Eisa QUOTE (Don @ Feb 20 07, 00:37 ) 91637We a... Feb 19 07, 20:29 Don The insertion of "barracuda" certainly t... Feb 20 07, 07:37 Eisa QUOTE (Don @ Feb 20 07, 12:37 ) 91663The ... Feb 21 07, 05:23 Don I am at a loss as to why barracuda mildly surprise... Feb 21 07, 08:32 Kathy Snow, I love it. It is simply wonderful. And wond... Mar 17 07, 22:35 Eisa QUOTE (Kathy @ Mar 18 07, 03:35 ) 93004Sn... Mar 19 07, 19:32 Kathy Oh thank you Kathy -- you have made my day! ... Mar 20 07, 04:30 Eisa Hi Kathy Your reply ... Yes, I say it the same w... Mar 20 07, 18:36 Don Hi Eisa, I do believe you have mastered an except... Mar 20 07, 18:44 Cleo_Serapis LOL - it's probably me adn the Bostonian thang....... Mar 20 07, 18:45 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Mar 20 07, 23:45 ) ... Mar 20 07, 18:50 Kathy QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Mar 21 07, 09:45 ) ... Mar 21 07, 00:42 Kathy Candy Clouds A shoal of phantom barracuda floats ... Mar 21 07, 00:30 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Snow on your wizard award winning tile! ... Apr 15 07, 09:45 Cathy Congratulations again Snow! lol Cathy Apr 17 07, 05:59 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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