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Quatre-par-Huit (Four-by-Eight) Octa-Quad, new form by Cleo - Jan 01 2006 |
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Quatre-par-Huit (for those who enjoy tetrameter) – created Jan 01 2006 by Lorraine M Kanter
In the tradition of the Trois-par-Huit poetic form I created last December, I’ll call this variation: Quatre-par-Huit
This 'Four by Eight’ or ‘Octa-Quad’ has similar rules as that of the Trois-par-Huit in that it is a poem containing 8 lines, displayed visually with three stanzas of either tercet, tercet, couplet (3, 3, 2) OR tercet, couplet, tercet (3, 2, 3) and looks best when center aligned as follows;
1. The title is also the final line.
The line length requirements: Line 1 ~ 4 syllables Line 2 ~ 8 syllables Line 3 ~ 12 syllables
Line 4 ~ 16 syllables Line 5 ~ 16 syllables
Line 6 ~ 12 syllables Line 7 ~ 8 syllables Line 8 ~ 4 syllables (is the title and summarizes the meaning of the poem)
The rhyme scheme requirements: Line 1. A Line 2. A Line 3. B Line 4. B Line 5. B Line 6. C Line 7. C Line 8. C

Quatre-par-Huit
Tetrameter makes this form all the more sweeter like it’s sister, the Trois-par-Huit, this eight line verse
begins with four, the ovation at sixteen; each line will traverse two tercets and one couplet: with a mid-point turn back to disperse in a diamond-like shape and a triple-rhymed beat
it’s title once more will repeat… Quatre-par-Huit
Why not give this a try? ~Cleo
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Cleo_Serapis Quatre-par-Huit (Four-by-Eight) Octa-Quad Jan 1 06, 15:19 AMETHYST Oh Lori, this is going to be perfect to write my o... Jan 1 06, 22:51 Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz.
I'm so glad you are excited about this f... Jan 2 06, 07:37 jgdittier Dear Cleo,
You Asked for IT!
Revised version
... Jan 2 06, 13:44 AMETHYST We're born from light,
that inspirits flesh to tak... Jan 2 06, 19:43 AMETHYST I heard your song
on the radio. It's been so long
... Jan 2 06, 22:58 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (jgdittier @ Jan. 02 2006, 13:44)Dear C... Jan 3 06, 06:37 Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz.
I'll be back soon (off to battle the sno... Jan 3 06, 06:39 jgdittier Dear Cleo,
It's plain difficult writing verse ... Jan 3 06, 07:58 AMETHYST Hi Ron,
Although I think you offered this as a ... Jan 3 06, 16:36 AMETHYST So Untimely
Although I knew
a long time coming...... Jan 3 06, 17:59 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Jan. 02 2006, 19:43)
We're... Jan 3 06, 19:12 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (jgdittier @ Jan. 03 2006, 07:58)Dear C... Jan 3 06, 19:21 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Jan. 02 2006, 22:58)
I hea... Jan 3 06, 19:25 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Jan. 03 2006, 17:59)
So Un... Jan 3 06, 19:28 AMETHYST QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 03 2006, 19:12)QUO... Jan 3 06, 20:56 AMETHYST QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jan. 03 2006, 19:25)QUO... Jan 3 06, 21:01 AMETHYST QUOTE You've moved me to tears... I can feel the p... Jan 3 06, 21:07 JustDaniel ... by your request, Lori...
quatre à suivre
For... Jan 6 06, 09:34 JustDaniel ... and here's the first of the promised ... Jan 6 06, 10:18 AMETHYST Hi Daniel,
Both of your first attempts at this ... Jan 7 06, 18:00 AMETHYST In Inspiration of Daniels Simply Mlee...
My Le... Jan 7 06, 20:50 JustDaniel Thank you for your previous words, Liz...
and I... Feb 4 06, 11:02 Cleo_Serapis Well done Liz and Daniel!
These really and !
... Feb 5 06, 10:07 JustDaniel Thank you, Lori...
and here's le tiers de qua... Feb 5 06, 11:37 Cleo_Serapis Truth's Prophesy
It’s smooth and rich,
quenchin... Oct 31 06, 20:11 Cleo_Serapis A Sacred Plea
Reflective times
jar the mind like ... Nov 12 06, 20:10 Larry They Help or Heal
Time’s hands erase
all memories... Apr 13 15, 13:46 Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry,
I am in love with your poem! I dud... Apr 14 15, 20:38 Larry Each Cherished Line
Dani alone
in strange new pla... Apr 20 15, 14:33 Cleo_Serapis Larry,
What a very poignant and lovely poem for D... Apr 22 15, 23:49 JustDaniel ... and I add my supreme admiration... for BOTH of... Apr 24 15, 02:21 Larry Thank you both very much. It's the least I co... Apr 24 15, 15:06
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