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Joyous Light
Stargazing luminescent skies His powdered dust revealed the wonderment of Winter’s breath dispersed across Fir’s field. Amid tall balsams, there she stood in cloak of glitter gold: a vigil over evening’s glow whose spark tempered the cold. I chose the path less often walked to greet her in the Wood between the pond and Nature’s Kings-- a trip misunderstood. My gift to bring – a treasure trove of ornamental rings were placed upon memorials beholding angel’s wings. A fringe of naked skin soon swept me up from tethered Earth and held me there, caressing love; a spiritual rebirth. Then came a flash of sparkling might: those trees had touched the sky! Starbursts of light bedecked their tips; red berried lace, oh my! The sentinels rejoiced with me, we shared God’s love that night where souls I hold so dear are safe within His Heaven’s light. Copyright © Lorraine M Kanter 17 Dec 2013 This post has been edited by Cleo_Serapis: Dec 19 13, 09:27
Reason for edit: THX Larry!
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Cleo_Serapis Joyous Light ** Dec 17 13, 20:37 
Larry Hi Lori and a very merry Christmas to you and your... Dec 18 13, 00:54 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry,
A very merry Christmas to you and your... Dec 18 13, 16:25 Thoth Hi Lorri
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