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Finding My Way... by Heartsong7
You steadied me when I could barely stand and warned me to be mindful where I stepped, yet knowing I would stumble, held my hand. I pulled away and fell, lay bruised and wept, afraid to try again. A tangled strand of darkness wrapped around me. While I slept, I dreamed you cleared the way. I could progress unfettered. Freed of fear I ran, I leapt enthusiastically, all pain and stress-- gone! ........ til dawn erased the dark and crept into my consciousness. With heavy eyes I looked upon a roadway, still unswept, that wound beneath the grey forbidding skies. You pulled me to my feet and gently shoved me out the door. I never felt more loved. This post has been edited by Cleo_Serapis: Sep 29 07, 09:20
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you Liz - I still have much editing to do on this one, so may defer if you don't mind. Let's wait and see how the few weeks go?
Much appreciated for the opportunity! ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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