John, I was a little harsh I admit with my crit but to set a standard high means not to comfort and to set a standard low would not fit.
You may be no prince Hamlet, no Eliot but to set your standard high would better sit the aspiring poet than the retiring poet.
I knew what you were trying with this lark and yet I have confidence you could describe the tree and not the bark, make something of your scribe
and that is not to say that you did not do the best you could, this is no job but at best a fun and fantastic plot, I 'aint no snob
and would be pleased to be your friend as long as you accept that in the end I will crit your work, not you, as I can only comprehend
that which I know, which is your poem I know nothing else about you being at home and not in yours, and I say let your imagination roam
I'll never crit that, but I may say what I think is flat although I may be wrong at that I am never wrong to believe you might be better for it
and one day maybe write like like Mr Eliot!
Cheers, Gregory
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