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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry  |
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He sways beside me, tattered brown fingers clawing, slapping and shaking— a cruciform figure in dark shadows. He stops… sighs… then turns— hooked thorns suckle strained sinews. ‘ Here accept the sword of absit omen, you must venture on— go slay your demons.’ A standstill. Tall gray torsos, stout roots underneath. Old growth, defused light, black nefarious impediments. The girth of lost days. Each sword stoke— a hollow ring…no echo…no echoes. Enough—we must return to the sunlight. John Macleod copyright Ó 18th March 2006 ·······  ·······Arnfinn
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
QUOTE men- the darkest shade of eyeshadow (Titian Blue is nice) Titian Blue??? Titian Blue, Blue? I bin’ labourin’ under the misapprehension that he invented a RED! No wonder me sunsets always look like moons in me drawins.  QUOTE All Aussie redheads are called ' Blue' or Bluey. aAAARRRRGGGGHHH!  Ya got me there cobber. I forgot that! Bonzer reply  mate!
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Arnfinn Unpardoned Jun 4 06, 07:05 
Nina Hi John
An intriguing poem though I feel I'm ... Jun 4 06, 16:24 
Arnfinn QUOTE(Nina @ Jun 4 06, 21:24 ) 76566Hi Jo... Jun 5 06, 01:02 Cybele G'day cobber,
Strewth mate! I bin goin... Jun 5 06, 02:56 Arnfinn QUOTE(Cybele @ Jun 5 06, 07:56 ) 76608G... Jun 5 06, 05:03 Cybele Me again Arn!
QUOTEDon't pussyfoot a... Jun 5 06, 06:59 Arnfinn QUOTE(Cybele @ Jun 5 06, 11:59 ) 76612Me ... Jun 6 06, 07:42 Cybele Watcha Arniiiiieee
Hey Grace ya getting into t... Jun 6 06, 08:39 Psyche Hi John !
Having trouble with yer conscien... Jun 6 06, 12:35 Cleo_Serapis Hi John.
An interesting tale of old!
I've onl... Jun 11 06, 13:43 Arnfinn Watcha Arniiiiieee
Hey Grace ya getting into this... Jun 12 06, 05:06 Arnfinn Hi Sylvia,
Hi John ! oops.gif
Having trouble... Jun 12 06, 05:31 Arnfinn Hi Lori,
n interesting tale of old! gimli... Jun 12 06, 05:51 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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