Musical Seduction :sunny: Options

[Guest_Nina_*]

Musical Seduction   (revised)

Crystal-pure notes,
filtered on zephyrs,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.




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Musical Seduction (original)

Crystal-pure notes,
carried on the breeze,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.

© Nina  2006

Nina

[Psyche]

Hi Nina !  :lovie:

This is so magical and romantic ! Delicately written, with wonderful images of nature and love interwoven. The musical background makes it even more beautiful. I can imagine the scene, a figure drifting up to meet her lover, the two of them joined in infinity.... metaphorical, maybe, but I like to think it's about real feelings, Nina.

Here again, of course, it could be a picture of death in her nicer aspects. After all, many a time death has been described as shining light, music, a person spiraling up to meet the loved ones that went before, and so on... An altogether lovely poem.

Hugs,
Sylvia  :butterfly: