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 Feb 12 06, 18:23
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Musical Seduction (revised)
Crystal-pure notes, filtered on zephyrs, swirl through sun-dappled trees. Mesmerising melody entices me, unresisting, into forest’s secret glade. Tendrils of harmony coil around my being; draw me into your arms; weave a shared destiny. As music spins enchantment, we spiral upwards: an inter-twined, shimmering presence, whirling into infinity. ---------------------------- Musical Seduction (original) Crystal-pure notes, carried on the breeze, swirl through sun-dappled trees. Mesmerising melody entices me, unresisting, into forest’s secret glade. Tendrils of harmony coil around my being; draw me into your arms; weave a shared destiny. As music spins enchantment, we spiral upwards: an inter-twined, shimmering presence, whirling into infinity. © Nina 2006 Nina |
  
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Feb 13 06, 03:54
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Crystal-pure notes,
filtered on zephyrs, swirl through sun-dappled trees. Mesmerising melody entices me, unresisting, into forest’s secret glade. Tendrils of harmony coil around my being; draw me into your arms; weave a shared destiny. As music spins enchantment, we spiral upwards: an inter-twined, shimmering presence, whirling into infinity. This is very romantic Nina. I enjoyed every line. filtered on zephyrs, I love your revision of this line. Mesmerising melody Nice alliteration here. Tendrils of harmony coil around my being; Very romantic I like the spinning/spiralling theme of the last verse and intertwined being reminiscent of the tendtils in the previous stanza. Great read Snow ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
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Nina Musical Seduction :sunny: Feb 12 06, 18:23 
Jox Hi Nina,
carried on the breeze, (Cliche - and rhy... Feb 12 06, 18:46 Nina Hi J
>J>carried on the breeze, (Cliche - and rhym... Feb 13 06, 01:12 ohsteve Nina a very fine sparkling wine of a poem, a... Feb 13 06, 01:43 Nina Hi Steve
Thanks very much, I'm pleased you en... Feb 13 06, 02:17 Nina Hi Snow
Thanks for popping in here to read. ... Feb 13 06, 07:19 Psyche Hi Nina ! :lovie:
This is so magical a... Feb 14 06, 12:57 Nina Hi Sylvia
>S>This is so magical and romantic ... Feb 14 06, 13:33 Cyn how did I miss this one of yours?
I do like this ... Feb 14 06, 13:45 Nina Hi Cyn
>C>how did I miss this one of yours?
not... Feb 14 06, 14:32 Cleo_Serapis Hi Nina.
What a lovely melody on the melody of a... Feb 21 06, 20:59 Nina Hi Lori
thanks so much. I'm chuffed you... Feb 22 06, 01:01 Cathy Hi Nina,
I don't know how I missed this but I... Feb 24 06, 11:16 Nina Hi Cat
>C>I don't know how I missed this but ... Feb 24 06, 12:41 Siren Excellent imagery here Nina,
I'll be back wit... Feb 24 06, 17:47 
Nina Thanks Dani
I look forward to your comments.
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