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  Nov 27 05, 08:19
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hi all.
 This is a piece mused from the November Pandora challenge. I had to include two words - I chose simmered and whip in this one. The params of this form; Lines 1 and 8 ~ 3 syllables Lines 2 and 7 ~ 6 syllables Lines 3 and 6 ~ 9 syllables Lines 4 and 5 ~ 12 syllables Line 8 is the title and summarizes the meaning of the poem. The rhyme scheme requirements: A A B B B C C C Stanza layout can be either 3 2 3 or 3 3 2. (Holiday) Potpourri Scents entice; simmered holiday spice caramel, chocolate drizzled glaze nutmeg, cinnamon, ginger: powdered-sugar craze savory ciders, scintillating sweets amaze dollops of fresh whipped-cream jubilee mouth watering decree potpourri ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Dec 3 05, 11:31
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 Assyrian  Posts: 203 Joined: 3-August 03 Member No.: 11 Real Name: Beth Writer of: Poetry |
Hey Cleo!
Man, you are the poetess supreme! All those big old terms! Too early in the morning! My only crit is that I can't have some of that popourri! Sounds super scrumptious!!! All that yumminess into such a nice, disciplined form - man, you gots me beat by a mile! The thought of any type of discipline makes me quake these days! LOL! Highly enjoyable! Flawless as far as my little eyeball can see. Least ya coulda done is a typo or two! (I'm still beating you there, though! NEENER! :p ) Big Hugs, Silly Ol' Me aka B. ······· ·······I am who I am.
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Cleo_Serapis Holiday Potpourri Nov 27 05, 08:19 
Don Good morning Cleo,
I conclude that this form is y... Nov 27 05, 09:29 Cleo_Serapis Hello Don.
Thanks Don - you should stop into Kar... Nov 27 05, 10:53 Don Yes, yes, I agree that I must take time to read Li... Nov 27 05, 11:07 Merlin Hi Cleo,
Once again, it was the sight of food that... Nov 27 05, 12:28 Cathy Such heavenly aromas! That's one of ... Dec 3 05, 09:55 
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