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 Apr 6 05, 19:01
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,607 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
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 *Graphic provided by Celtic Castle Designs  *Graphic provided by Celtic Castle Designs Lover's Locket ( new title for The Lucky Locket) They clung in passion -- long embraces, sadly kissed goodbye while tears of desperation stained their faces; coming battles fuelled their fears. He wore her gift against his chest amidst the trench filled battle zones. She soldiered on, although depressed; his destination was unknown. The lucky bean-shaped locket hung upon it’s chain, beneath his shirt. A sudden burst of bullets stunned him, threw him down -- almost unhurt. One bullet nearly killed him, struck him near his heart but hit the charm and ricocheted -- no stroke of luck. Her love had kept him safe from harm. The treasured locket’s kept inside my `reminiscence box’ today, inherited with heart-felt pride when my dear father passed away. His parents lived this touching tale of love, the seedling family tree; their golden heirloom still prevails -- a keepsake genealogy. ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
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Sep 13 05, 18:11
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrats Snow on your Mod Choice award winning tile!
 Well done!   ~Cleo :) ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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Eisa Lover's Locket Apr 6 05, 19:01 
Dear Snow,
Although this could be "a poet's v... Apr 6 05, 22:26 Nina Hi Eisa
What a lovely story you tell in this poem... Apr 7 05, 06:47 Cybele Hello Eisa,
Well you know this romantic tale wo... Apr 7 05, 07:36 Toumai Hi Eisa,
What a wonderful tale. a few milimetres ... Apr 7 05, 14:41 JustDaniel Greetings again, Snow!
Since I've already... Apr 8 05, 16:20 Eisa Hello Alan
Yes -- this really is my family hi... Apr 8 05, 17:11 Eisa QUOTE(Nina @ April 07 2005, 07:47)Hi Eisa
Wh... Apr 8 05, 17:17 Eisa Hello Grace :wave:
That is so true -- no l... Apr 8 05, 17:24 Eisa Hi Fran
Yes it is a great tale and one I hope ... Apr 8 05, 17:30 Eisa Hi Daniel :wave:
Good to see you again on ... Apr 8 05, 17:35 Billydo Hi Snow
What a delightful poem and fabulous story... Apr 9 05, 04:32 Eisa QUOTE(Billydo @ April 09 2005, 05:32)Hi Snow
... Apr 14 05, 19:25 Eisa Oh wow Lori! -- I'm away for a while and I... Sep 13 05, 18:46 Cleo_Serapis Well deserved Snow!
I hope so too! Look forward ... Sep 13 05, 18:53 Cathy Congratulations Snow on your Mod Choice Award... Sep 13 05, 19:40 Nina Hi Snow
Well done for your award for this piece. ... Sep 13 05, 23:54 Toumai Congratulations, Snow
A wonderful poem and well ... Sep 14 05, 00:40 Arnfinn Hi Eisa,
This type of poem is totally right up m... Sep 14 05, 03:49 Eisa QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Sep. 13 2005, 19:53)Well... Sep 14 05, 17:26 Eisa QUOTE(Cathy @ Sep. 13 2005, 20:40)Congratulat... Sep 14 05, 17:28 Eisa QUOTE(Nina @ Sep. 14 2005, 00:54)Hi Snow
Wel... Sep 14 05, 17:30 Eisa QUOTE(Toumai @ Sep. 14 2005, 01:40)Congratula... Sep 14 05, 17:31 Eisa QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Sep. 14 2005, 04:49)Hi Eisa,
... Sep 14 05, 17:33 AMETHYST Hey Snow,
CONGRATULATIONS! :ent: Thi... Sep 14 05, 23:52 jgdittier Dear Snow,
I'm late getting here but right wit... Sep 17 05, 06:58 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Snow on your wizard award winning tile!
... Sep 25 05, 06:33 Nina Congratulations Snow on winning a wizard for this ... Sep 25 05, 07:27 Jox Well done Eisa for your Wizardry and the ensuing a... Sep 25 05, 07:32 Cathy LOL I'm back!
Congratulation... Sep 25 05, 09:32 Eisa QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Sep. 15 2005, 00:52)
Hey S... Oct 1 05, 13:57 Eisa QUOTE(jgdittier @ Sep. 17 2005, 07:58)Dear Sn... Oct 1 05, 13:59 Eisa QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Sep. 25 2005, 07:33)Cong... Oct 1 05, 14:02 Eisa QUOTE(Nina @ Sep. 25 2005, 08:27)Congratulati... Oct 1 05, 14:04 Eisa QUOTE(Jox @ Sep. 25 2005, 08:32)Well done Eis... Oct 1 05, 14:05 
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