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Klaus' Expensive Lunch, A poem |
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Sep 5 05, 11:48
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© Todd Congreve, 2005. I, Todd Congreve, do assert my right to be identified as the author of this work in accordance with Sections 77 and 78 of The Copyrights, Designs And Patents Act, 1988. (Laws of Cymru & England, as recognised by international treaties). This work was simultaneously copyrighted in the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and the United States of America. This work is posted as an unpublished work in order to elicit critical assistance and other helpful comment, only.
Upgraded from AC to AD, thanks to Nina's two suggestions and from AD to AE following Liam's call for greater clarity.
Klaus’ Expensive Lunch by TC
Pub lunch: two men debate political philosophy. One creed - one country - one loyalty - one master.
A beer; kinship? Questions: sister? agents? mad? bad? sane? good? depends on perspective.
Harwell needs you - I’m your friend, Klaus - help me keep you there. “We” need to convince “them.”
perspectives - only things which matter.
Your side; my side; “our” side, fought Nazi Germany... today - different perspectives.
Mental-partition wall: made of what? Those same brain cells with divided loyalties? How does one cope with neuron osmosis? Protect job; freedom; lover?
What price a pint? Nine years - that’s post-war inflation.
Come on Klaus; I’m your friend. Your welfare is my chief concern. Now, hand me the keys to your gaol cell...
...Good man, Klaus
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Ref: TC 0432 AD (Started: 25/07/2005)
Klaus’ Expensive Lunch by TC
Pub lunch: two men debate political philosophy. One creed - one country - one loyalty - one master.
A beer; kinship? Questions: sister? agents? mad? bad? sane? good? depends on perspective.
Harwell needs this man - I’m your friend, Klaus - help me keep you there. We need to convince them.
perspectives - only things which matter.
Your side; my side; our side. Fighting Nazi Germany - but today? Today... different perspectives.
What price a pint? Nine years - that’s post-war inflation.
Mental-partition wall: made of what? Those same brain cells which have divided loyalties? How does one cope with neuron osmosis? Protect job; freedom; lover?
Come on Klaus; I’m your friend. Your welfare is my chief concern. Now, hand me the keys to your gaol cell...
...Good man, Klaus.
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This was inspired by a BBC R4 play “Atomic Lunch” broadcast on 25/07/2005.
Here’s the BBC website comment: Monday 25 July - Atomic Lunch - By Michael Butt
In January 1950 two men meet for lunch in an Oxfordshire pub. One is the Head of Physics at Harwell Research Laboratory. The other is a senior MI5 investigator. One of the most important spy stories of the cold war is about to be revealed.
I would add:
Klaus is Klaus Fuchs - Britain's notorious "Atom Spy" who sold UK /USA atomic secrets to the soviets. His lunch "companion" was a senior MI5 interrogator.
Here‘s a Wikipedia info page on him... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Klaus_Fuchs
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Sep 11 05, 10:39
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Hello James.
An interesting piece! I'll need to research this individual at another point in time. I was a bit unclear as to your nine-years – what reference is this to - until I read your footnote.
Given this (because I didn’t notice the footnote at first) I wonder if you should put that year in your poem at the start?
Cheers! ~Cleo :pharoah:
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A beer; kinship? Questions: sister? agents? mad? bad? sane? good? {d}[D]epends on perspective.
I’m your friend, Klaus - help me keep you there. “We” need to convince “them.”
{p}[P]erspectives - only things which matter.
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Jox Klaus' Expensive Lunch Sep 5 05, 11:48 Nina Hi J
An intriguing poem, though I'm not sure ... Sep 5 05, 14:27 Jox Hi Nina.
>N>An intriguing poem, though I'm no... Sep 5 05, 15:30 Nina Hi J
Thank you for popping in, critting and readi... Sep 5 05, 15:47 Jox Hi Nina,
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Sorry, I wasn't trying to encourage ... Sep 5 05, 16:27 Nina Hi J
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If you feel like that, yes you should av... Sep 5 05, 17:17 Nina thanks J
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A really big welcome to MM to you. Great ... Sep 6 05, 17:34 Jox Hi Liam,
Again, thank you very much for your crit... Sep 7 05, 15:19 PashernatePoet I think the redraft does work better yes :) - If y... Sep 9 05, 04:12 Jox Hi Liam,
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