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Cleo_Serapis
post Jul 15 05, 05:40
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Hi all. wave.gif

I just came across this poetic form from a few different sites and posted it in Karnak.  Read.gif

I thought it might be FUN for us to try a JOINT poem together!

For those who love the 'snippet' and 10-word' challenges we offer in the ACROPOLIS forum - check this out at:
http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/cgi-bin....;t=4672


Cento:

From the Latin word for "patchwork," the cento is a poetic form made up of lines from poems by other poets. It is a poem that is simply "patched together".  It is also called by some, a mosaic poem.  cool.gif

Though poets often 'borrow' lines or phrases from other writers and mix them in with their own (that would be Cleo's snippet challenge responses  wave.gif), a true cento is composed entirely of lines or phrases from other authors' works. Early examples can be found in the work of Homer and Virgil.

With lines from Charles Wright, Marie Ponsot, Emily Dickinson, Sylvia Plath, and Samuel Beckett, the staff of the Academy of American Poets composed the following as an example (as found on this web link):

"In the Kingdom of the Past, the Brown-Eyed Man is King
Brute. Spy. I trusted you. Now you reel & brawl.
After great pain, a formal feeling comes--
A vulturous boredom pinned me in this tree
Day after day, I become of less use to myself,
The hours after you are gone are so leaden."


A Cento/patchwork/mosaic poem can be rhymed or unrhymed.

It can be created with an emphasis on lines or phrases, or the lines/phrases might be chosen because they contain a focused concordance of a specific word.


An example:

Hope Over Doubt *

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,
Still do the stars impart their light.
What is your substance, where of are you made?
Sound, sound the clarion, fill the fife
To see the world in a grain of sand.

Say not the struggle naught availeth.
He that is down needs fear no fall.
All is best, though we oft doubt.
Go and catch a falling star.

Copyright  © 2001, William T. Delamar
Line:
1) "Sonnet ii" (William Shakespeare);  
2) "Falsehood" (William Cartwright);  
3) "Sonnet v" (William Shakespeare);  
4) "Answer" (Sir Walter Scott);  
5) "Augeries of Innocence" William Blake;  
6) "Say not the Struggle Naught (Arthur Hugh Clough);  
7) "The Shepherd Boy Sings in the Valley of Humiliation" (John Bunyan);  
8) "Samson Agonistes ii" (John Milton);  
9) "song" (John Donne)


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Would anyone be interested in creating a Mosaic compilation together?
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ADD A LINE OR TWO AND CONTINUE OUR OWN POETIC OUTPUT:

GOOD LUCK!  cheer.gif  sings.gif

I'll start:

If a clod be washed away by the sea

1) For Whom The Bell Tolls by John Donne








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Cleo_Serapis
post Sep 11 05, 06:53
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That's great Lucie!  :pharoah2

So now we have:

There was an ancient City, stricken down
Dead-pale between the houses high

(1) 'Four Riddles' by Lewis Carroll
(2) 'The Lady of Shalott' by Alfred Tennyson


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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings

Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind.

"I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter

Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

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- Cleo_Serapis   Cento or Mosaic Patchwork team challenge   Jul 15 05, 05:40
- - Cybele   Hi Lori,   This looks like fun. Here's my c...   Jul 15 05, 17:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ July 15 2005, 18:04)Hi Lori, ...   Jul 15 05, 18:34
- - Arnfinn   Hi all, Line 4 A willow-bough, distilling odour...   Jul 19 05, 06:30
- - Cleo_Serapis   Well done John!  :troy: Now that we've esta...   Jul 20 05, 18:56
- - Cleo_Serapis   OK... Here's line 5: In withered husks of some d...   Jul 20 05, 19:00
- - Cleo_Serapis   Arnie, Grace .... shall we continue?   Aug 9 05, 05:24
- - Cybele   Hi Lori, :pharoah2 Yes, by all means, just need a...   Aug 9 05, 08:49
- - Arnfinn   Yep! This poem is what I call different. ...   Aug 10 05, 06:16
- - Cybele   Last line of verse one Why, having won her, do I ...   Aug 10 05, 06:29
- - Cleo_Serapis   Excellent Grace!   Aug 10 05, 06:38
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Aug. 10 2005, 07:29) New Sta...   Aug 11 05, 05:30
- - Cybele   Line two, verse two.. But thy eternal summer sh...   Aug 11 05, 06:00
- - Cleo_Serapis   UPDATE: IGNORE THIS REPLY PLEASE.... See next one ...   Aug 12 05, 05:28
- - Arnfinn   Aww I was going to add sumthin else. 'And if...   Aug 12 05, 06:41
- - Cleo_Serapis   I like your line suggestion more Arnie   - so I'll...   Aug 12 05, 07:36
- - Cleo_Serapis   and :(  at the same time!   Aug 12 05, 07:43
- - Cybele   Fourth line second verse: I meet my shadow in the...   Aug 12 05, 09:42
- - Cleo_Serapis   Ahhh This is so good you two!   Aug 12 05, 11:35
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Aug. 12 2005, 10:42) Fifth li...   Aug 14 05, 07:53
- - Arnfinn   Hello, hello, hello... Thanks Lori for accepting ...   Aug 17 05, 07:47
- - Cleo_Serapis   First line, third verse: Truth rose once more, p...   Aug 17 05, 19:24
- - Cybele   (argh! ) I messed up by missing out a lump, s...   Aug 18 05, 02:10
- - Cleo_Serapis   Sure Grace - whatever you like..   Aug 18 05, 05:30
- - Cleo_Serapis   For stanza 3, line 3: With a despotic sway all gi...   Aug 23 05, 19:47
- - Toumai   This is very interesting to watch unfolding ...   Aug 24 05, 02:53
- - Cybele   Hi Fran, Hope you had a lovely holiday. Thanks ...   Aug 24 05, 04:11
- - Toumai   Hi, Grace QUOTE Hope you had a lovely holiday. Th...   Aug 24 05, 04:20
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Fran and Grace! TY! Sure Grace- I edited th...   Aug 24 05, 05:31
- - Cybele   Hello Lori, Yes, the only change so far. It is ...   Aug 27 05, 02:20
- - Cleo_Serapis   Sounds good Grace! Cleo   Aug 27 05, 05:24
- - Arnfinn   EH, wots going on eear... Wot lines ave we got fo...   Aug 29 05, 04:24
- - Cybele   Oh Arnnie!   I've told yer 50 million ti...   Aug 29 05, 04:50
- - Cybele   [b]Stanza three, new second line, sorry folks, I c...   Aug 29 05, 05:14
- - Cybele   Hi Lori, Arn, Making up for my sins! Line 4...   Aug 29 05, 05:19
- - Cleo_Serapis   How lovely Grace! Well done... Arnie? Are you u...   Aug 29 05, 05:35
- - Arnfinn   Hi Lori, Whot we got, Befores I go ta check out ...   Aug 30 05, 03:08
- - Cybele   Arnniiiee   You make mock of Cicely Scragragget?...   Aug 30 05, 03:25
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hmmmm, I think we should perhpas end this one and ...   Aug 30 05, 05:18
- - Arnfinn   Nah! Dont be a silly Billy Lori So I was a be...   Aug 30 05, 05:52
- - Arnfinn   Hey Grace, No ya havent, youve read Cicely Scrag...   Aug 30 05, 06:33
- - Cleo_Serapis   So which one would you like for the next line John...   Aug 30 05, 07:46
- - Cybele   Hi Arn, Please go to the Basilica for the reply t...   Aug 30 05, 07:56
- - Cleo_Serapis   OOohhhh - This one is very pretty Arrrnnnniieeee...   Aug 30 05, 18:06
- - Arnfinn   Sorry Lori I must apologise. I'm not giving...   Aug 31 05, 04:36
- - Cleo_Serapis   I think that sounds great John! :hsdacne: Just ONE...   Aug 31 05, 05:29
- - Ephiny   Hello everyone.. Is it ok to join in?  These are ...   Aug 31 05, 07:52
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Lucie. Come on in surely and join us! I pre...   Aug 31 05, 16:07
- - Arnfinn   Lori Truth rose once more, perforce, to meet mank...   Sep 1 05, 02:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   I agree thanks to Lucie! If our Grace agrees, w...   Sep 1 05, 05:36
- - Cybele   Hi Lori, Arniie and Lucy (Welcome! Lovely to s...   Sep 5 05, 06:58
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Sep. 05 2005, 07:58) Hi Lori...   Sep 5 05, 07:03
- - Arnfinn    :cool:  :cool:  :cool: Well the...   Sep 6 05, 06:09
- - Ephiny   Yes, The Calling seems very apt and a lovely title...   Sep 8 05, 12:56
- - Cleo_Serapis   Cool!   Here is the result of our first team effor...   Sep 9 05, 17:58
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hello! Let's start another, shall we? I'll star...   Sep 10 05, 06:42
- - Ephiny   How about "Dead-pale between the houses high" fr...   Sep 11 05, 06:45
- - Cybele   Hi Lore and Lucie, Stanza 1 L3 God's pampe...   Sep 11 05, 07:44
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi everyone! I'm going to start another tile for...   Sep 11 05, 10:14
- - Arnfinn   Hello There was an ancient City, stricken down D...   Sep 12 05, 05:49
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Arnfinn @ Sep. 12 2005, 06:49)Hello ...   Sep 12 05, 06:33
- - Cleo_Serapis   Closing this thread as the first Cento poem is now...   Sep 12 05, 06:36

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