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 Aug 19 03, 03:40
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 Egyptian  Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry  |
Heyyyyyy Snow!
LOVE your poem! Do you live in Australia? South Africa? I'm sweltering here in intense summer heat and you're writing about beautiful spring!  However, the poem is lovely and lyrical. I love meter and rhyme .. just wish I could write it better. Thanks for being the first poster in this forum! Lovely way to begin. Blessings, Athena/Dolly 
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Aug 16 03, 20:25
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 16 2003, 17:53) Earth Awakes As birds fly home to warble songs all nature stirs to life, and longs to shake off winter’s sleepy break. Springtime is here and earth’s awake. On slender stems, exquisite leaves become the daffodils’ green sleeves. Their yellow trumpets raise to sing and herald birth of verdant spring. Twigs new and old burst out their buds, while creatures wake and nature floods the earth with life, refreshed from sleep; bright meadow flowers start to peep. The sun shines through a softened breeze to set the scene; I feel at ease. Just Lovely Eisa! I love the whole poem and your ending sings!  Thank you for being the first to psot in this forum. You've added a tile to the Mosaic in style! Cheers! Cleo :pharoah2 ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Athena Earth Ovation Aug 19 03, 03:40 
Eisa I have recently revised this as `Earth's O... Aug 16 03, 16:53 Eisa Cheers Cleo
I like your poem too left a messa... Aug 18 03, 07:28 Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 16 2003, 16:53)Earth Awake... Aug 19 03, 08:10 Eisa QUOTE (Athena @ Aug. 19 2003, 03:40)Heyyyyyy ... Aug 19 03, 16:48 Eisa QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:10)Hello ... Aug 19 03, 16:55 Brahms Eisa, made happier reading your words
and glad for... Sep 4 03, 18:03 
Brahms Your comfortable words fit and remind the same
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