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 Aug 19 03, 08:14
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry  |
Resplendent crispy stirring leaves,
drop softly toward the ground. Within bright beauty through the trees, soft pastels “hush” the sound. Twirling, whirling, holding tight smooth contours; windspun song. Fluttering breezes, foliage flight drift dancers clinging long. Matchless outlines tinted deep, peach, crimson; vista’s bliss. Blended gold-lime sundries seep dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss. Waltzing freefall takes its course, Fall’s season shortly ages. Reminders flash away with force, calm Autumn’s vivid stages. ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Aug 19 03, 16:40
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:14) Resplendent crispy stirring leaves, drop softly toward the ground. Within bright beauty through the trees, soft pastels “hush” the sound. Twirling, whirling, holding tight smooth contours; windspun song. Fluttering breezes, foliage flight drift dancers clinging long. Matchless outlines tinted deep, peach, crimson; vista’s bliss. Blended gold-lime sundries seep dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss. Waltzing freefall takes its course, Fall’s season shortly ages. Reminders flash away with force, calm Autumn’s vivid stages. Hi again Aphrodite Well you sure have done it again....this is wonderful.    The images you have presented here are breathtaking  I particularly love " waltzing freefall" "swirling wirling" "autumn's vivid stages"......Ooooh and lots more! I also think the rhythm flows beautifully.  Read you again Eisa
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Aphrodite Waltzing Freefall Aug 19 03, 08:14 
Cleo_Serapis Absolutely stunning Lindi!
Course, Autum is also... Aug 19 03, 11:47 Aphrodite QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Aug. 19 2003, 11:47)Abs... Aug 19 03, 12:20 Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 19 2003, 16:40)QUOTE (Aphr... Aug 21 03, 08:26 Brahms Very fine, and easily takes one through
autumn... Sep 4 03, 18:01 Brahms Your action is so very good with autumn life,
than... Sep 4 03, 18:05 Aphrodite QUOTE (Brahms @ Sep. 04 2003, 18:01)Very fine... Sep 5 03, 13:46 Aphrodite QUOTE (Brahms @ Sep. 04 2003, 18:05)Your acti... Sep 5 03, 13:47 
Hi Lindi.
It's a wonderful rhyme scheme and ... Oct 19 03, 14:25 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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