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Aug 9 05, 16:07
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Faery Award Winner
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Argh!
I am holding my hands over my ears, arghing. I'll scream again - argh - but you can't see or hear.
I'm too polite; not wanting to hurt your feelings;
if I erupted, it would only make things worse.
But oh! To have leapt, like you, from the womb, replete with the sum total of knowledge in the universe: scientist, artist, wit, wag and all things double you.
I wish I could let rip; I'm plastic faced, stiff as tulle, and as transparent.
I am dakhma; Trappist; bit-lipped; as a grave.
Right, that's it, you've done it now. I'm going to be he-rude-ite; construct an argument so nice; dense, devilish, daedal, that once lured in, you will never escape ...
I wish ...
Argh!
First Version Argh!
I am holding my hands over my ears and arghing. I'll scream again - argh - but you can't see or hear.
I'm just too polite; not wanting to hurt your feelings;
if I erupted, it would only make things worse.
But oh! To have leapt, like you, from the womb, replete with the sum total of knowledge in the universe: scientist, artist, wit, wag and all things double you.
I wish I could let rip; I'm plastic faced, stiff as tulle, and about as transparent.
I am dakhma; Trappist; bit-lipped; as a grave.
Right, that's it, you've done it now. I'm going to be he-rude-ite; construct an argument so nice; dense, devilish, daedal, that once sucked in, you will never get out ...
I wish ...
Argh!
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Aug 10 05, 19:15
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Mosaic Master
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Tee hee!
Why is it SHE always has the last word? ???
Never mind...
This is a very cool piece Mike! I like how you've shaped eah stana giving focus to the most important aspects.
I'll be back again soon - right now I can't see anything to nit...
Cheers! ~Cleo :D
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Billydo Argh Aug 9 05, 16:07 Psyche Hey Mike !
Happened on this just before bedt... Aug 9 05, 22:09 Nina Hi Mike
Ah, you have summed up the story of my li... Aug 10 05, 01:02 Billydo Hi Sylvia
Me, a transgressor? Surely not. Can I h... Aug 10 05, 11:53 Billydo Hi Nina
This was an incident at work when I but m... Aug 10 05, 11:55 Billydo Hi Cleo
Thank you very much.
Cheers
Mike Aug 11 05, 04:35 Psyche QUOTE(Billydo @ Aug. 10 2005, 14:53)Hi Sylvia... Aug 11 05, 12:55 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Psyche @ Aug. 11 2005, 13:55)Hi Mike ! ... Aug 11 05, 19:19 Billydo Hi Cleo
Thanks you very much. I'm pleased you... Aug 16 05, 16:16 Psyche Hi Cleo !
Psssstt - oh Psyche ....
Why ... Aug 16 05, 22:15 Billydo Ooh ta!
I'm of to the Lake District to wa... Aug 17 05, 02:21 Jox Hi Mike....
I take it your yellow things are alre... Aug 17 05, 02:35 Billydo Ta James
Just killin' time while they complet... Aug 17 05, 03:28 Jox M,
You haven't built them a bathroom each??? ... Aug 17 05, 03:40 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Mike on your faery award winning tile!
... Aug 19 05, 05:21 Nina Hi Mike
Congratulations on your Faery Award for t... Aug 19 05, 06:44 Jox Well done Mike - "Join MM and get a Free Faery" - ... Aug 19 05, 07:23 Cathy Congratulations on a well deserved award!! Aug 19 05, 08:26 Don Congrats on you latest award.
Don Aug 19 05, 09:02 Billydo Thanks y'all.
Being a transgressor, I would l... Aug 19 05, 13:45 Jox Hi Mike,
The Nude is fine - I do't think anyo... Aug 19 05, 16:30 Psyche QUOTE(Billydo @ Aug. 19 2005, 16:45)Thanks y... Aug 20 05, 10:28 Billydo Hi James
No Wainright, but I did have a map in a ... Aug 21 05, 04:11 Billydo Hi Sylvia
Thank you for nominating me for the awa... Aug 21 05, 04:19
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